Conspiracies
A Pleiades poems the dangers of conspiracies,11 total reviews
Comment from harmony13
The author's words are so true. The poem is engaging, descriptive and
creative. I found these words to say just what happens on social media
sites! I pondered on something I believe "think first before you speak or write"! The artwork is awesome and compliments this poem. Great Poem!
reply by the author on 19-Sep-2023
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The author's words are so true. The poem is engaging, descriptive and
creative. I found these words to say just what happens on social media
sites! I pondered on something I believe "think first before you speak or write"! The artwork is awesome and compliments this poem. Great Poem!
Comment Written 19-Sep-2023
reply by the author on 19-Sep-2023
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Thank you for the nice review. I'm glad you like the poem. Too many people believe these strange things they read on the internet. Sometimes they get angry if others don't share their opinion.
Comment from JSD
Excellent attempt at this quite complex and difficult form, Beth. Well done! A really good analysis of the evils of computers and social media, however much good they might also do. Did this win?
reply by the author on 19-Sep-2023
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Excellent attempt at this quite complex and difficult form, Beth. Well done! A really good analysis of the evils of computers and social media, however much good they might also do. Did this win?
Comment Written 19-Sep-2023
reply by the author on 19-Sep-2023
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No it got third place and along with others. I didn't expect it to do too well. Too many people are intrigued by conspiracies including some of my family members. Thank you for the review.
Comment from Debbie D'Arcy
Wow, Beth! How did I miss this? You're on fire with these contest entries! And this one is great. Such a good topic and your verse flows beautifully with clever, unforced rhyme, sending your message out loud and clear. From one who has been well and truly conned earlier this year, I really appreciate the force of your strong words here. Well done! Debbie
reply by the author on 18-Sep-2023
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Wow, Beth! How did I miss this? You're on fire with these contest entries! And this one is great. Such a good topic and your verse flows beautifully with clever, unforced rhyme, sending your message out loud and clear. From one who has been well and truly conned earlier this year, I really appreciate the force of your strong words here. Well done! Debbie
Comment Written 18-Sep-2023
reply by the author on 18-Sep-2023
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Thnak you Debbie. Three of my four kids have been conned anrd that has me concerned because they still don't realize it. So it is a topic that weight heavy for me. I'm been entering contests to see I can win enough to boost my member dollars. So far it is costing more to enter. I won 3.75 on this one. LOL
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Well, you deserved more. This raising of dollars is a bit of a nightmare isn't it? I have no idea how some can post almost daily unless they're using hard cash to buy them:(
Comment from Andrea Kepple
I like how you structured your poem. Everything flows together, a rhythm is contained within the poem. You also did a good job choosing a subject for the writing prompt in this contest.
reply by the author on 18-Sep-2023
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I like how you structured your poem. Everything flows together, a rhythm is contained within the poem. You also did a good job choosing a subject for the writing prompt in this contest.
Comment Written 17-Sep-2023
reply by the author on 18-Sep-2023
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Thank you Andrea. I appreciate the review and nice comments.
Comment from Loren .
Well put and so reflective of today's society and challenges. You followed through with the rules for this challenge. Add that to the contemporary theme of the poem itself, I think you have a winner here. Best of luck. Loren
reply by the author on 17-Sep-2023
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Well put and so reflective of today's society and challenges. You followed through with the rules for this challenge. Add that to the contemporary theme of the poem itself, I think you have a winner here. Best of luck. Loren
Comment Written 17-Sep-2023
reply by the author on 17-Sep-2023
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Thank you for a great review Loren. I'm glad you liked the poem.
Comment from Karen Cherry Threadgill
This poem was right on the money. Good workI Imagine this was hard to do. When you get a chance, please read my first lune poem, my first poem period, and my first writing here, "Remittance". Tell me what you think. Karen
reply by the author on 17-Sep-2023
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This poem was right on the money. Good workI Imagine this was hard to do. When you get a chance, please read my first lune poem, my first poem period, and my first writing here, "Remittance". Tell me what you think. Karen
Comment Written 17-Sep-2023
reply by the author on 17-Sep-2023
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Thank you for an excellent review. I'm glad you liked the poem.
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U R Welcome Karen
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I'm not sure why you think I'm Karen. This is blind contest. You aren't supposed to know who I am.
Comment from Bill Schott
This Pleiades poem, Conspiracies, has the proper formatting and seems to be the result of allowing conspiracy theorists like Rupert Murdock move his scandal rags to the mainstream through Fox "News".
reply by the author on 17-Sep-2023
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This Pleiades poem, Conspiracies, has the proper formatting and seems to be the result of allowing conspiracy theorists like Rupert Murdock move his scandal rags to the mainstream through Fox "News".
Comment Written 17-Sep-2023
reply by the author on 17-Sep-2023
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Thank you Bill. I think you understand the problem. Too many are falling victim to these conspiracies. They seem interesting and possible but they lead to fear and distrust of everything.
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
There is so much truth in these words and conspiracy theories put fear into people and I remember during the pandemic people were afraid to be inoculated and some even died as a result as doctors were encouraging people not to have the vaccine. I enjoyed your fine post for the contest, love Dolly x x x
reply by the author on 17-Sep-2023
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There is so much truth in these words and conspiracy theories put fear into people and I remember during the pandemic people were afraid to be inoculated and some even died as a result as doctors were encouraging people not to have the vaccine. I enjoyed your fine post for the contest, love Dolly x x x
Comment Written 17-Sep-2023
reply by the author on 17-Sep-2023
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Thank you, Dolly. Conspiracies are on my mind a lot late as I see so many being caught up in the web including my own children.
Comment from Iza Deleanu
Cute little poem and so true to our reality - Collecting tidbits designed to hurt
Cults create fear as means to convert - disinformation is the death of a nation:) Thank you for sharing and good luck with the contest.
reply by the author on 17-Sep-2023
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Cute little poem and so true to our reality - Collecting tidbits designed to hurt
Cults create fear as means to convert - disinformation is the death of a nation:) Thank you for sharing and good luck with the contest.
Comment Written 17-Sep-2023
reply by the author on 17-Sep-2023
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Thank you for a great review, Iza. I really appreciate the six stars.
Comment from kahpot
Excellent and so very true, your words tell the truth of these criminals, this poem will do very well in this prompt, as it flows, rhymes, and holds a wonderful message, very well written, best wishes for your contest****kahpot
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reply by the author on 17-Sep-2023
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Excellent and so very true, your words tell the truth of these criminals, this poem will do very well in this prompt, as it flows, rhymes, and holds a wonderful message, very well written, best wishes for your contest****kahpot
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Comment Written 16-Sep-2023
reply by the author on 17-Sep-2023
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Thank you for an excellent review. I really appreciate your comments.
