Beach
Barefoot on the sands...11 total reviews
Comment from tempeste
Ciao mystery poet, you now have three votes!
This is where I would love to be ..far away from the chaos and the madness of humanity.
First, it was the gays saying that they were normal and that two men living like a couple were normal. None of my business what they do in privacy but I refuse to think what they do is "normal".
Now we have all the transgender crap where a man believes he can become a woman and vice versa.
Then we have those that label themselves "Fluid" so one day they feel they are male the next female. No comment.
And these transgenders demand that we change our grammar to suit their madness .. they, them, their used in the singular.
Governments are allowing psychologists and therapists to prescribe puberty blockers to kids as young as 10 years old.
Then we have all the woke movement, tearing down statues of historical people, and the ban on teaching certain events in our past history.
There are dark, evil forces that want to destroy family and our children which are the foundation of a society.
George Soros wants to create a new world order, a globalised world without historical, artistic, cultural, and religious memory.
I miss the old days when things were simple, and normal.
I want to be on that island, enjoy the sea breeze, listen to the ocean and the only crap I'm willing to deal with is seagull crap.
Sorry for the rant.
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Ciao mystery poet, you now have three votes!
This is where I would love to be ..far away from the chaos and the madness of humanity.
First, it was the gays saying that they were normal and that two men living like a couple were normal. None of my business what they do in privacy but I refuse to think what they do is "normal".
Now we have all the transgender crap where a man believes he can become a woman and vice versa.
Then we have those that label themselves "Fluid" so one day they feel they are male the next female. No comment.
And these transgenders demand that we change our grammar to suit their madness .. they, them, their used in the singular.
Governments are allowing psychologists and therapists to prescribe puberty blockers to kids as young as 10 years old.
Then we have all the woke movement, tearing down statues of historical people, and the ban on teaching certain events in our past history.
There are dark, evil forces that want to destroy family and our children which are the foundation of a society.
George Soros wants to create a new world order, a globalised world without historical, artistic, cultural, and religious memory.
I miss the old days when things were simple, and normal.
I want to be on that island, enjoy the sea breeze, listen to the ocean and the only crap I'm willing to deal with is seagull crap.
Sorry for the rant.
Comment Written 18-Sep-2023
Comment from Andrea Kepple
I want to go on vacation to a beach after reading your poem.
You picked a good subject for the writing prompt in this contest.
The words you chose create strong images in the readers mind. I found myself transported to a beach while reading your poem.
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I want to go on vacation to a beach after reading your poem.
You picked a good subject for the writing prompt in this contest.
The words you chose create strong images in the readers mind. I found myself transported to a beach while reading your poem.
Comment Written 17-Sep-2023
Comment from Alexandra Trovato
This is an excellent poem for the challenge. I enjoyed reading it. Your presentation is very good, too. You also use descriptive words and colorful descriptions.
Best wishes!
Alexandra
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This is an excellent poem for the challenge. I enjoyed reading it. Your presentation is very good, too. You also use descriptive words and colorful descriptions.
Best wishes!
Alexandra
Comment Written 17-Sep-2023
Comment from Wendy G
That is very beautiful, especially because it flows and rhymes so smoothly. The words bring back memories of special times, and the image is a lovely one, reminding me of where I used to live. Best wishes for the contest.
Wendy
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That is very beautiful, especially because it flows and rhymes so smoothly. The words bring back memories of special times, and the image is a lovely one, reminding me of where I used to live. Best wishes for the contest.
Wendy
Comment Written 17-Sep-2023
Comment from Laine Carson
I loved your poem. I could see myself there, feel the hot sun, then see the stars. I could feel the sand under my feet and that kiss. The romance given to us by the sea...beautiful!
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I loved your poem. I could see myself there, feel the hot sun, then see the stars. I could feel the sand under my feet and that kiss. The romance given to us by the sea...beautiful!
Comment Written 17-Sep-2023
Comment from Karen Cherry Threadgill
The poem is clever. The picture was complimentary.I Imagine this was hard to do. When you get a chance, please read my first lune poem, my first poem period, and my first writing here, "Remittance". Tell me what you think. Karen
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The poem is clever. The picture was complimentary.I Imagine this was hard to do. When you get a chance, please read my first lune poem, my first poem period, and my first writing here, "Remittance". Tell me what you think. Karen
Comment Written 17-Sep-2023
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
There is nothing quite like the feeling of being near the shore and enjoying the sea and sand and lying on the beach without a care in the world, I enjoyed this fine poem, love Dolly x x x
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There is nothing quite like the feeling of being near the shore and enjoying the sea and sand and lying on the beach without a care in the world, I enjoyed this fine poem, love Dolly x x x
Comment Written 17-Sep-2023
Comment from Pearl Edwards
This is a beautiful Pleiades poem about a stroll along the beach with the person you love by your side. You have given a sense of love and peace in this poem, of forever soulmates. Loved it. Good luck in the contest.
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This is a beautiful Pleiades poem about a stroll along the beach with the person you love by your side. You have given a sense of love and peace in this poem, of forever soulmates. Loved it. Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 16-Sep-2023
Comment from kahpot
Beautiful, so serene, your words give an image of such peacefulness and contentment, I really like the image of the restless sea, very well written, best wishes for your contest****kahpot
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Beautiful, so serene, your words give an image of such peacefulness and contentment, I really like the image of the restless sea, very well written, best wishes for your contest****kahpot
Comment Written 16-Sep-2023
Comment from Debbie D'Arcy
Oh wow, I didn't see the waves moving at first! That's lovely and the whole post is a peaceful, meditative experience. Well done for fulfilling a quite difficult brief so evocatively! Good luck! Debbie
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Oh wow, I didn't see the waves moving at first! That's lovely and the whole post is a peaceful, meditative experience. Well done for fulfilling a quite difficult brief so evocatively! Good luck! Debbie
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Comment Written 16-Sep-2023
