Comment from Dolly'sPoems

Excellent

This is a lively post and you took me to the stock car racing here with your well chosen words for this challenge, I good luck with the contest, this is entertaining, love Dolly x x x

 Comment Written 18-Sep-2023

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reply by the author on 18-Sep-2023

Thanks Dolly. X

Comment from Laine Carson

Excellent

Cute! I am pleasantly surprised by your whimsy. You must like stock cars? I find it an unusual topic to write about then here you go making it appealing in a poem. I enjoyed the ride.

 Comment Written 17-Sep-2023

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reply by the author on 17-Sep-2023

Thanks Laine. I am not into stock cars. The poem just wrote itself. Jen

Comment from Karen Cherry Threadgill

Excellent

The poem is clever. The picture was complementary.I Imagine this was hard to do. When you get a chance, please read my first lune poem, my first poem period, and my first writing here, "Remittance". Tell me what you think. Karen

 Comment Written 17-Sep-2023

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reply by the author on 17-Sep-2023

Thanks for the review Karen. I have looked at your profile but it doesn?t show ?Remittance?

Comment from Pearl Edwards

Excellent

Well done with all your S words to tell the story of a night watching the stock-cars racing, the sounds the screeching the speed. I would close stockcars into one word for the title requirements. Good luck in the contest

 Comment Written 16-Sep-2023

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reply by the author on 16-Sep-2023

Thank you so much.

Comment from royowen

Excellent

I think you've penned a very good Pleiades poem here in this competition, souped up is a very good name for a car with grunt, see all the metaphors you provoke? Well done, good luck. Blessings Roy

 Comment Written 16-Sep-2023

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reply by the author on 16-Sep-2023

Thank you so much Roy.

reply by royowen on 17-Sep-2023

Welcome

Comment from kahpot

Excellent

An excellent entry for this prompt, humor combined with the truth, as a man's heart must follow his most desired urges, very well written, best wishes for your contest****kahpot

 Comment Written 16-Sep-2023

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reply by the author on 16-Sep-2023

Thank you so much

Comment from Debbie D'Arcy

Excellent

Aww that's a bit naughty but probably true. I'm not familiar with this verse but you seem to have achieved it within the requirements of the brief as well as injecting humour into your sentiments. Good luck! Debbie

 Comment Written 16-Sep-2023

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reply by the author on 16-Sep-2023

Yes it is probably too naughty. I may change lt but it is true. Thanks Debbie

reply by Debbie D'Arcy on 16-Sep-2023

Well, it's not actually that rude is it? - I've definitely read worse on this site. So only change if you're asked (which is doubtful)