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Viewing comments for Chapter 1 "September 13th, 2023"
I write everyday to a man who does not love me.

2 total reviews 
Comment from Liz O'Neill
Exceptional
This work has reached the exceptional level

This has a power slap of gallows humor. Dare I say, it is hilarious. It this called gaining distorted pleasure at another's what? discomfort? Agony? Misfortune? The irony of this is many a reader will tragically identify. So, I guess we can say, you have not suffered in vain. You could be a stand up commedian like Tig Notaro A+

 Comment Written 16-Sep-2023


reply by the author on 16-Sep-2023
    Thank youuuu! It?s validating to say the least as I?m a spastic mess. Think a rubber band that gave up
reply by the author on 16-Sep-2023
    Thank youuuu! It?s validating to say the least as I?m a spastic mess. Think a rubber band that gave up
reply by the author on 16-Sep-2023
    Thank youuuu! It?s validating to say the least as I?m a spastic mess. Think a rubber band that gave up
reply by Liz O'Neill on 16-Sep-2023
    There's your delightful gallows humor again. Have you ever hear Tig Notaro? that's you
Comment from Debbie D'Arcy
Excellent
Not yet exceptional. When the exceptional rating is reached this is highlighted

I do enjoy your ramblings. They're fun and some of them resonate with me which is always reassuring. I always think streams of consciousness are a delight both for the reader and the writer and we learn so much from just letter our minds unravel. I would personally prefer larger font and it may be a consideration next time for us oldies? But you've definitely got a great style here and have found a very entertaining genre. Thanks for sharing Debbie

 Comment Written 16-Sep-2023


reply by the author on 16-Sep-2023
    Thank you, I edited the font size
reply by the author on 16-Sep-2023
    Thank you, I edited the font size
reply by the author on 16-Sep-2023
    Thank you, I edited the font size