Comment from Gloria ....

Exceptional

I completely enjoyed your haiku. The imagery is vivid, and the satori line original and brought a smile.

How true that the river flows sanely once it's got the falling over with.

Much enjoyed. :)

Gloria

 Comment Written 16-Sep-2023

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reply by the author on 18-Sep-2023

Thank you once again for this honour. You have made my day.

Comment from Karen Cherry Threadgill

Excellent

I needed sunglasses to tone down all the color! hahahaha What is up with all the neon waterfall pictures? The poem is nice and simply stated. I enjoyed your writing. Please read "Alistar Approaches and tell me what you think. Everyone has been giving me ideas, And I will soon start on Chapter Two.
Karen

 Comment Written 16-Sep-2023

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reply by the author on 18-Sep-2023

the advance editor does that ! Every one tells me that the type in the basic editor is small and they have difficulty in reading...Thank you very much for dropping by.

reply by Karen Cherry Threadgill on 18-Sep-2023

U R Welcome

Comment from Gypsy Blue Rose

Excellent

Sanku,

Thank you for participating in the haiku club event. Great entry with a good syllable count and connection between lines. Beautiful presentation and imagery.

Good job,

Gypsy

 Comment Written 16-Sep-2023

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reply by the author on 18-Sep-2023

Thank you very much for the encouraging words

Comment from Katherine M. (k-11)

Excellent

The images you cast up are extremely graphic, and this is a fine Haiku you have presented us with. I had trouble at the beginning with the word 'sanely', but in the end I came around to its presence. kay

 Comment Written 16-Sep-2023

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reply by the author on 18-Sep-2023

Thank you very much for these kind words. I am happy that this haiku has appealed to many.

Comment from Dolly'sPoems

Excellent

Nothing gentle about this deafening waterfall and perhaps it is Niagara? I heard the rage in this post and I enjoyed the deafening water crashing here, love Dolly x x x

 Comment Written 16-Sep-2023

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reply by the author on 18-Sep-2023

Thank you very much for dropping by. This was the image in the club page..

Comment from jaded831

Exceptional

Your haiku captured the waterfalls beautifully. You not only painted a picture you added sound with the word splash. Your syllable count is correct, add the picture is beautiful. Together they are awesome.

 Comment Written 16-Sep-2023

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reply by the author on 18-Sep-2023

Thank you very much for this honour .You have made me very happy.

Comment from GWHARGIS

Excellent

Wouldn't it be great if our rage was as beautiful as a waterfall. I loved the imagery in this. Something so beautiful yet so powerful. It can kill you or bring you peace. Your poem was quite moving and wise. Gretchen

 Comment Written 16-Sep-2023

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reply by the author on 18-Sep-2023

thank you very much .

Comment from Debbie D'Arcy

Excellent

A truly vivid scene both in the image and reflected in your fine verse. Love the personification of the racing, roaring rage of the water before its anger is calmly spent. An excellent entry for the club! Well done! Debbie

 Comment Written 16-Sep-2023

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reply by the author on 18-Sep-2023

Thank you very much for the understanding and the encouragement..

Comment from JSD

Excellent

Lovely writing. Gorgeous artwork and great colours to complement your imagery. It is the last line that makes this really successful; economically expressed and meaningful. Well done.

 Comment Written 16-Sep-2023

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reply by the author on 18-Sep-2023

Thank you very much .

Comment from lyenochka

Excellent

I love the personification of the water and the metaphor of the raging waters for the expression of the emotion of the anger that gets spent and flows sanely after the waterfalls races down. Great waterfall haiku!

 Comment Written 16-Sep-2023

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reply by the author on 18-Sep-2023

Thank you very much.