South Carolina
Viewing comments for Chapter 20 "Carolina Girl"Beautiful poetry written primarily in this state
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Comment from barbara.wilkey
This poem is hard to review because I'm not entirely sure I understand it. I can't decide if it's innocent or not.
Carolina Girl won't you care for me? (comma after 'Girl')
reply by the author on 15-Sep-2023
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This poem is hard to review because I'm not entirely sure I understand it. I can't decide if it's innocent or not.
Carolina Girl won't you care for me? (comma after 'Girl')
Comment Written 15-Sep-2023
reply by the author on 15-Sep-2023
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Barbara, this is a love poem for my wife Dawna Deborah Smrkovsky.
Comment from JSD
Lovely! Great free verse again Ricky. Always enjoy your poetic wanderings. Not sure what 'walk her chassis' means, but nevertheless most enjoyable to read. A sense of Neil Young here?
reply by the author on 15-Sep-2023
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Lovely! Great free verse again Ricky. Always enjoy your poetic wanderings. Not sure what 'walk her chassis' means, but nevertheless most enjoyable to read. A sense of Neil Young here?
Comment Written 15-Sep-2023
reply by the author on 15-Sep-2023
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Walking the chassis actually means making Love to a woman's body.
Thanks for putting me in the same class as Neil Young!
Doctor Ricky
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Every day is a school day. Walking the chassis!!!!
Comment from Sanku
The picture is of a very pretty girl .No wonder the man is so affected and begging ..he is ready to anything for her even clean her car under moonlight...wish him well
reply by the author on 15-Sep-2023
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The picture is of a very pretty girl .No wonder the man is so affected and begging ..he is ready to anything for her even clean her car under moonlight...wish him well
Comment Written 15-Sep-2023
reply by the author on 15-Sep-2023
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Thanks Sanku and that's my wife!
Doctor Ricky