Cloud Meditations
Relaxing while looking at clouds. (1-5-5-9)26 total reviews
Comment from Jesse James Doty
Fluffy pillows are like clouds in the sky. They transport imagination and that is a great way to use your muse when writing.
This was something I hadn't noticed before yet I love it just the same.
Thanks for sharing your point of view when it comes to imagination.
Jesse
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Fluffy pillows are like clouds in the sky. They transport imagination and that is a great way to use your muse when writing.
This was something I hadn't noticed before yet I love it just the same.
Thanks for sharing your point of view when it comes to imagination.
Jesse
Comment Written 22-Sep-2023
Comment from dragonpoet
Hi Lisa,
This is a nicely done short poem with a strong extended metaphor for clouds. They do inspire imagination at times, like all things in nature.
Congrats on placing second in the contest.
Keep writing and stay healthy
Have good day.
Joan
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Hi Lisa,
This is a nicely done short poem with a strong extended metaphor for clouds. They do inspire imagination at times, like all things in nature.
Congrats on placing second in the contest.
Keep writing and stay healthy
Have good day.
Joan
Comment Written 20-Sep-2023
Comment from Ginda Simpson
You created a lovely image and feeling with this poem, Lisa May, and it is well-deserving of its second place win. Congratulations. Thanks for sharing your talent with us.
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You created a lovely image and feeling with this poem, Lisa May, and it is well-deserving of its second place win. Congratulations. Thanks for sharing your talent with us.
Comment Written 20-Sep-2023
Comment from Eleri
I love the images that this poem suggests. The thought of being carried away by restful clouds is very soothing. The poem has the correct number of syllables per line for the four line contest and is lovely and quiet. Good luck in the contest
Eleri
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I love the images that this poem suggests. The thought of being carried away by restful clouds is very soothing. The poem has the correct number of syllables per line for the four line contest and is lovely and quiet. Good luck in the contest
Eleri
Comment Written 16-Sep-2023
Comment from Cindy Decker 2
Lisa,
This is a fantastic poem. I think our imaginations and our souls are what keep us going in this sometimes gloomy world.
Your words are light, like clouds. You fit the syllable count.
Your photo compliments your words.
Good luck with this, Lisa.
Blessings,
Cindy
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Lisa,
This is a fantastic poem. I think our imaginations and our souls are what keep us going in this sometimes gloomy world.
Your words are light, like clouds. You fit the syllable count.
Your photo compliments your words.
Good luck with this, Lisa.
Blessings,
Cindy
Comment Written 16-Sep-2023
Comment from Bill Schott
This four-line poem, Cloud Meditations, has the proper formatting and finds that the cerebral relaxation afforded by puffs of frozen vapor is surprisingly effective.
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This four-line poem, Cloud Meditations, has the proper formatting and finds that the cerebral relaxation afforded by puffs of frozen vapor is surprisingly effective.
Comment Written 15-Sep-2023
Comment from poetwatch
I'm like you, Jenny, I see and feel the journey I take on puffy white clouds. I've seen most animals sailing the seas of the sky. One time I'm pretty sure I saw an angel on a clear day. His were the only clouds in the sky. Dressed in white, with wings down to his calves and a helmet with a beak like a hawk. Imagination is wonderful. This is a good entry for the Four Line Poem Contest. Thank you for sharing.
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I'm like you, Jenny, I see and feel the journey I take on puffy white clouds. I've seen most animals sailing the seas of the sky. One time I'm pretty sure I saw an angel on a clear day. His were the only clouds in the sky. Dressed in white, with wings down to his calves and a helmet with a beak like a hawk. Imagination is wonderful. This is a good entry for the Four Line Poem Contest. Thank you for sharing.
Comment Written 14-Sep-2023
Comment from Isabel Fontes
I enjoyed reading this poem, especially the vivid metaphors describing the peaceful clouds.
The structure is well-crafted, and the flow is smooth.
Good luck in the contest!
reply by the author on 14-Sep-2023
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I enjoyed reading this poem, especially the vivid metaphors describing the peaceful clouds.
The structure is well-crafted, and the flow is smooth.
Good luck in the contest!
Comment Written 14-Sep-2023
reply by the author on 14-Sep-2023
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Thank you for the supportive comments in your review, and for your good wishes.
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You are most welcome, Lisa.
Comment from Mia Twysted
That sounds so nice. To be laying on the clouds just floating around like you were on a lazy river. Able to look down and see the world and people look so small.
reply by the author on 14-Sep-2023
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That sounds so nice. To be laying on the clouds just floating around like you were on a lazy river. Able to look down and see the world and people look so small.
Comment Written 14-Sep-2023
reply by the author on 14-Sep-2023
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Yes, daydreaming is nice - but safer on the ground with no chance of falling through that cloud.
Thanks for reviewing!
Comment from Mary Vigasin
Beautiful and peaceful metaphors to carry your reader on a restful trip with their imagination.
Good luck in the contest. It should be a contender.
Best wishes
Mary
reply by the author on 14-Sep-2023
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Beautiful and peaceful metaphors to carry your reader on a restful trip with their imagination.
Good luck in the contest. It should be a contender.
Best wishes
Mary
Comment Written 14-Sep-2023
reply by the author on 14-Sep-2023
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Thanks for your nice review and good wishes, Mary. I appreciate your time.