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In The Arms Of A Sunflower

Finding Your Muse Club

20 total reviews 
Comment from Bill Schott
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This poem, In the Arms of a Sunflower, finds four steps towards a person's processing through tough times. Reflecting, renewing hope; launching again, and discovering wellness again, Nice.

 Comment Written 15-Sep-2023

reply by the author on 16-Sep-2023
    Thank you for the insightful review, Bill.
Comment from Sally Law
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I so enjoyed your healing poem, K. L. I find that sunflowers cheer up all the day and have them near me as much as possible. Their beautiful faces follow the sun as it goes. Sending you my best today for this marvelous offering.
Sal XOs

 Comment Written 15-Sep-2023

reply by the author on 15-Sep-2023
    Thank you, Sally.

    Have a great weekend;)
Comment from Joanne Gill-Maddick
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This is a very beautifully written free verse poem. Love this.
Misty panes yawn
haze of dawn fades
a~lone ray of sun
pierces somber skies,
indigo shadows nestle
against morning mountains
her heart hurts
she reflects. Very beautiful presentation. Nice photo to compliment your words as well.

 Comment Written 15-Sep-2023

reply by the author on 15-Sep-2023
    Thank you, Joanne.

    Have a great weekend;)
reply by Joanne Gill-Maddick on 15-Sep-2023
    Your welcome 🙂
Comment from Pearl Edwards
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I enjoyed the format of your free write K.L. and especially the impact of- she reflects - she brightens -
she releases - she heals. Good use of alliteration throughout this lovely write. Well done.
cheers,
valda

 Comment Written 15-Sep-2023

reply by the author on 15-Sep-2023
    Thank you for reviewing my verse, your critique is appreciated.

    Have a great weekend, Pearl;)
Comment from Isabel Fontes
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This free verse poem is magnificently structured in a rhythm that flows effortlessly through vivid moments, painting them in a way that inspires and inspires the reader.
It was an absolute pleasure to read it, and its excellence is undeniable.

 Comment Written 14-Sep-2023

reply by the author on 14-Sep-2023
    Isabel, your review has made my day!!!

    Thank you:)
reply by Isabel Fontes on 15-Sep-2023
    You are most welcome, K.L. :-)
Comment from harmony13
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The author's words are engaging, descriptive and creative. I found these
words having a meaningful message. Thank you for the author's notes -
they speak volumes! The poem flows and connects well. The artwork is
perfect and compliments this poem. Great Poem!

 Comment Written 14-Sep-2023

reply by the author on 14-Sep-2023
    Thank you for your time and review.

    The connection you felt made me smile ;)
Comment from John Ciarmello
Exceptional
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I love poetry like this, K.L. Graceful and glowing!

There are no wrinkles in this perfectly ironed piece. It drips with the meaning of never wanting a moment in the day to end.

A woman watching the morning sun release its beauty on a sunflower. Her mood changes with the day and the flower.

I loved it, and I hope I got the interpretation close enough for your liking.

Best, JohnC

 Comment Written 14-Sep-2023

reply by the author on 14-Sep-2023
    You received it perfectly, John.

    It?s so rewarding when a reader connects to my writing and takes the message away with them.

    I appreciate your comments and generous stars.

    Have a great day!
Comment from Boogienights
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The healing power of nature is put on display, in this well written poem. It's amazing how our spirit can be lifted, by a cooling breeze or the song of a lark.

 Comment Written 14-Sep-2023

reply by the author on 14-Sep-2023
    Agreed!!

    Thank you for your time and review!
Comment from Sanku
Exceptional
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Reflects, brightens ,releases,and finally heals! You have achieved a brilliant cathartic experience through a butterflies taking refuge on a sunflower's arm ....beautiful concept and execution...

 Comment Written 14-Sep-2023

reply by the author on 14-Sep-2023
    Thank you.

    I appreciate your critique and generous stars!
Comment from Goodadvicechan
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You B did a good job in achieving showing a woman's suffering in her
moment of reflection ~
moment of hope ~
moment of healing.

The following " a~lone ray of sun pierces somber skies,
indigo shadows nestle
against morning mountains ~"shows she is hurt.

I like this too. " her pain
rides on the back of wings
toward a pink horizon ~" This is another way to show the pain.

Thank you for sharing


 Comment Written 14-Sep-2023

reply by the author on 14-Sep-2023
    Thank you for taking the time to read and review my verse.
reply by the author on 14-Sep-2023
    Thank you for taking the time to read and review my verse.
reply by the author on 14-Sep-2023
    Thank you for taking the time to read and review my verse.
reply by the author on 14-Sep-2023
    Thank you for taking the time to read and review my verse.