2023 Gypsy's Haiku
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Comment from Mark Schardine
An old farmer knows that his life must end, and although he will do all he can to stay alive, we know that sometime, perhaps even this year, his life will end, his family will mourn him.
reply by the author on 20-Sep-2023
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An old farmer knows that his life must end, and although he will do all he can to stay alive, we know that sometime, perhaps even this year, his life will end, his family will mourn him.
Comment Written 20-Sep-2023
reply by the author on 20-Sep-2023
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Thank you very much for your excellent review and kind words.
Gypsy
Comment from aryr
What a fantastic haiku, Gypsy. I guess everything has to say goodbye to something. In this case it is the strawberries that wish the farmers goodbye. Blessed Be n Hugs!!!
reply by the author on 15-Sep-2023
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What a fantastic haiku, Gypsy. I guess everything has to say goodbye to something. In this case it is the strawberries that wish the farmers goodbye. Blessed Be n Hugs!!!
Comment Written 15-Sep-2023
reply by the author on 15-Sep-2023
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Thank you very much for your excellent review, feedback, and kind words. Blessed be.
Gypsy hugs
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Most welcome, Gypsy.
Comment from kahpot
It is so very sad when nature/weather makes it so hard for the farmers, that they must give up their lifetimes work, very well written and presented****kahpot
reply by the author on 15-Sep-2023
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It is so very sad when nature/weather makes it so hard for the farmers, that they must give up their lifetimes work, very well written and presented****kahpot
Comment Written 14-Sep-2023
reply by the author on 15-Sep-2023
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Thank you very much for your excellent review and kind words. Have a wonderful weekend.
Gypsy hugs
Comment from GWHARGIS
Maybe I took this too literally. Or it just could be that I'm in the mood for Halloween. The last line did it for me. Lol. Thanks for sharing this. Gretchen
reply by the author on 14-Sep-2023
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Maybe I took this too literally. Or it just could be that I'm in the mood for Halloween. The last line did it for me. Lol. Thanks for sharing this. Gretchen
Comment Written 14-Sep-2023
reply by the author on 14-Sep-2023
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LoL I'm happy to be a Halloween fan with you. My grandson loves it too. He loves the front yard monsters decorations.
Thank you very much for your excellent review and kind words.
Gypsy hugs
Comment from shelley kaye
nah... farmer's life doesn't really end, just goes into a winter rest lol :)
i am not sure "waves" is really the right word for this... maybe whistles?
it also could be just me LOL!!
nice haiku with sweet pics
thank you for sharing
shelley :)
reply by the author on 14-Sep-2023
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nah... farmer's life doesn't really end, just goes into a winter rest lol :)
i am not sure "waves" is really the right word for this... maybe whistles?
it also could be just me LOL!!
nice haiku with sweet pics
thank you for sharing
shelley :)
Comment Written 14-Sep-2023
reply by the author on 14-Sep-2023
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Wind waves goodbye is an important imagery I intended. Whistles is not the right word for my intent.
The farmer dies as the strawberries is the juxtaposition...it shows the connection between all sentient beings in nature.
Death and end of crop juxtaposition is intentional.
Thank you very much for your excellent review and kind words.
Gypsy hugs
Comment from AP Apgar
I like your haiku poem- nice picture presentation- good flow - good syllable count - story about strawberry season ending and framer going on vacation now that his job is done - good job - AP
reply by the author on 14-Sep-2023
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I like your haiku poem- nice picture presentation- good flow - good syllable count - story about strawberry season ending and framer going on vacation now that his job is done - good job - AP
Comment Written 13-Sep-2023
reply by the author on 14-Sep-2023
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Thank you very much for your excellent review and kind words.
Gypsy hugs
Comment from lyenochka
That's sad. But we all are given our set time to live from strawberries to human lives which can be brief or into the hundreds. But we can try to do our best to bear the best fruit when living.
reply by the author on 14-Sep-2023
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That's sad. But we all are given our set time to live from strawberries to human lives which can be brief or into the hundreds. But we can try to do our best to bear the best fruit when living.
Comment Written 13-Sep-2023
reply by the author on 14-Sep-2023
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Thank you, big sister. Good point.
Love
Marival
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
I am sad to say goodbye to the summer and the strawberries and we still have many in the shops just now, and we still have warm temperatures! But here in your write you are preparing yourself for he crisp wind which will soon take over, much enjoyed, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 13-Sep-2023
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I am sad to say goodbye to the summer and the strawberries and we still have many in the shops just now, and we still have warm temperatures! But here in your write you are preparing yourself for he crisp wind which will soon take over, much enjoyed, love Dolly x
Comment Written 13-Sep-2023
reply by the author on 13-Sep-2023
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Thank you very much for your excellent review and kind words.
Gypsy hugs
Comment from Ulla
Yes, in most countries this is true, but do you know that we have strawberries most of the year here in Spain? I eat them at breakfast time every day.
I loved your haiku. Ulla xx
reply by the author on 13-Sep-2023
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Yes, in most countries this is true, but do you know that we have strawberries most of the year here in Spain? I eat them at breakfast time every day.
I loved your haiku. Ulla xx
Comment Written 13-Sep-2023
reply by the author on 13-Sep-2023
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Yes, I know in some climax strawberries grow year round. We don't have them in winter.
Thank you very much for your excellent review and kind words.
Gypsy hugs