Comment from Bill Schott

Excellent

This tyburn, My Muse Said, has the proper formatting and gives the rules of thumb for posting your work on a poetry site. Think it up, write it down, check it over, and put it out there. Neat.

 Comment Written 26-Sep-2023

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reply by the author on 26-Sep-2023

Thank you Bill, for your wonderful comments, as always very much appreciated****kahpot

Comment from BermyBye50

Excellent

kahpot,

This is a great Tyburn poem and a great winning entry. Your entry matches all the requirements of the contest. Congratulations on the win.

All the best,

Eugene

 Comment Written 15-Sep-2023

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reply by the author on 15-Sep-2023

Thank you very much Eugene, for your wonderful and encouraging comments, as always very much appreciated****kahpot

Comment from Debbie D'Arcy

Excellent

Although I've never heard of this verse form before, well done on your accomplishment here. It's clever, reads fluently and informatively with a great accompanying image and is a great contender. Good luck! Debbie

 Comment Written 14-Sep-2023

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reply by the author on 14-Sep-2023

Thank you very much for your wonderful review

Comment from Gypsy Blue Rose

Excellent

Excellent entry for the Tyburn Poetry writing prompt Contest.

I like the presentation too. Concrete images easy to visualize.

Good syllables count and connection between lines.

Good luck in the contest.

Gypsy
"Poetry heals the wounds inflicted by reason" -- Novalis

 Comment Written 14-Sep-2023

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reply by the author on 14-Sep-2023

Thank you very much

Comment from jaded831

Excellent

Definitely a fun write all the writers at Fanstory can relate. Your poem expresses the writing experience in a very creative way. The picture adds to your poem and together they are awesome. Good luck in the contest.

 Comment Written 14-Sep-2023

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reply by the author on 14-Sep-2023

Thank you very much

Comment from Sanku

Excellent

i liked this the best .Your words have theme and you have brought it out very well. I especially liked the last two lines that encompassed the entire theme .all the best.

 Comment Written 14-Sep-2023

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reply by the author on 14-Sep-2023

Thank you very much

Comment from jim vecchio

Excellent

those five words sum up the how and why of creative writing. Thus far, my choice for Number One! Thank you for showing me how to write a meaningful Tyburn! I can see that these words satisfied you well!

 Comment Written 13-Sep-2023

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reply by the author on 13-Sep-2023

Thank you so very much, this form was fun to try again

reply by jim vecchio on 13-Sep-2023

I'm definitely going to try it soon.

Comment from Dolly'sPoems

Excellent

It sound like you have your muse under control here and we caught a glimpse of its power with this fine alliteration and compute, much enjoyed, love Dolly x x x

 Comment Written 13-Sep-2023

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reply by the author on 13-Sep-2023

Thank you so very much

Comment from Eleri

Exceptional

This is an excellent tyburn poem - well done. I am truly impressed as this is an awkward form to master. I love the idea behind this poem and your chosen words. Good luck in the contest
Eleri

 Comment Written 13-Sep-2023

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reply by the author on 13-Sep-2023

Wow! Thank you so very much, though a bit tricky this form is fun to try, thank you for the wonderful six stars

Comment from Sally Law

Excellent

This is a wonderfully penned illustrated and tyburn poem, mystery writer. Tyburn poetry is one of the most difficult forms of poetry. You made it look effortless. Sending you my best today as always, and best wishes for the upcoming contest.
Sally. :))

 Comment Written 13-Sep-2023

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reply by the author on 13-Sep-2023

Thank you so very much, yes these are a bit tricky, but fun to try