I Choose Rainbows
Viewing comments for Chapter 56 "Depression In 13 Words"Thoughts from the dark side
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Comment from Alexandra Trovato
This is an excellent st
poem. Although I can never understand what it means to you, I can tell it is well written.Your presentation is very good. You also use descriptive words, well, and that draws in a reader.
Best wishes!
Alexandra
reply by the author on 13-Sep-2023
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This is an excellent st
poem. Although I can never understand what it means to you, I can tell it is well written.Your presentation is very good. You also use descriptive words, well, and that draws in a reader.
Best wishes!
Alexandra
Comment Written 12-Sep-2023
reply by the author on 13-Sep-2023
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My Smile
I like to smile
I like to see others smile
I've never seen you smile
Do you have a smile
I have a weird smile
This is my smile
O O
O
o. o
o o
Comment from Neo!
This is a great poem that fits the theme. It's well-written, and I like how sparse it is. "It is my destiny" reflects the black and white thinking that can seem so common in people who have depression. Great Job, good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 13-Sep-2023
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This is a great poem that fits the theme. It's well-written, and I like how sparse it is. "It is my destiny" reflects the black and white thinking that can seem so common in people who have depression. Great Job, good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 12-Sep-2023
reply by the author on 13-Sep-2023
My Smile
I like to smile
I like to see others smile
I've never seen you smile
Do you have a smile
I have a weird smile
This is my smile
O O
O
o. o
o o
