Comment from Dr. Nad

Exceptional

Well Debi here I am late on Saturday night one more time I need to stop in and check out some FanStory submissions. I checked out this one and I give it a six star rating thanks for sharing all that you do!

 Comment Written 10-Nov-2024

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reply by the author on 10-Nov-2024

Thanks so much, my triplet brother for these awesome comments and six stars from you. Your are so sweet. Thanks again!! Stop sometime when you stay a little longer. LOL... love ya, Debi

reply by Dr. Nad on 18-Nov-2024

When they read the MRI they said they could tell that something had happened but everything looked great now.

Comment from LateBloomer

Exceptional

Hi Debi, this is so cute. Not only do these cats have nine lives, but they have ESP too. One of them must take after their great grandma? Hmm?

Your poem reads and flows well and has good humor within.
Of special note:

Patch wears the pants in Helen's house, but Ruby wears a dress

(Very cute imagery. I could just see Patch in his manly denim, and Ruby in her pink and frilly dress.)

Well done. Good rhyming. This poem made me smile.
Good morning to you, my sweet Sis. Xo. M

p.s. Maybe Patch and Ruby need to dress up for Halloween?

 Comment Written 15-Sep-2023

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reply by the author on 16-Sep-2023

Hi there Sweetie, and thank you for this kind and fun review and words. It was fun to write after Kenzie decided to move and said her cat was acting weird. I laughed and said it reminded me of Helen's cat and a lightbulb went off. Funny how it started to feel real after a while. Haha! Thanks for your generous six stars too, my dear sotu!!

Comment from jake cosmos aller

Excellent

loved this poem about two kitty cats scheming about their upcoming move with their humans. Cats I am convinced are alien creatures from another dimension, who barely tolerate their human friends.

 Comment Written 14-Sep-2023

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reply by the author on 14-Sep-2023

Hi Jake, I thank you so much for this kind review and comments for my Patch and Ruby poem.
After Kenzie said they were moving and Ruby was acting strange, I needed to have a little laugh. I appreciate your very kind comments for it and for having a little fun with me.
Thank you again, my dear friend.

Comment from Raul1

Excellent

It is wonderful how cats can get along with each other but not all of them because they tend to fight against each other. Excellent work! Thank you for sharing! Interesting.

 Comment Written 14-Sep-2023

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reply by the author on 14-Sep-2023

Raul '. I thank you so much for this kind review and comments for my Patch and Ruby poem. '
After Kenzie said they were moving and Ruby was acting strange, I needed to have a little laugh. I appreciate your very kind comments for it and for having a little fun with me.
Thank you again, my dear friend.

Comment from Sanku

Excellent

I know all about patch's adventure and have listened to her soliloquy .Now She is conspiring with Rubi to keep a control over their missus...so cute. i am an unashamed lover of cats!

 Comment Written 14-Sep-2023

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reply by the author on 14-Sep-2023

Santha, thank you so much for this kind review and comments for my Patch and Ruby poem.
After Kenzie said they were moving and Ruby was acting strange, I needed to have a little laugh. I appreciate your very kind comments for it and for having a little fun with me.
Thank you again, my dear friend.

Comment from Katie Mae Dead

Excellent

Hi Debi.
Very sweet tribute to your friend's cat and the move.
Really nice stanzas in 8/6 which is such a great form to write with. It flows well with good strong rhymes.
Luv&stuff,
Katiemaedead

 Comment Written 14-Sep-2023

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reply by the author on 14-Sep-2023

Katie,.I thank you so much for this kind review and comments for my Patch and Ruby poem.
After Kenzie said they were moving and Ruby was acting strange, I needed to have a little laugh. I appreciate your very kind comments for it and for having a little fun with me.
Thank you again, my dear friend.

reply by Katie Mae Dead on 14-Sep-2023

You are most welcome!

Comment from Kana2

Excellent

The cats are so cute! Also, I love how the poem was put together! He was so cheerful and inspiring, as always. It brightened my day to read this. :)))

 Comment Written 14-Sep-2023

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reply by the author on 14-Sep-2023

Kana 2, I thank you so much for this kind review and comments for my Patch and Ruby poem.
After Kenzie said they were moving and Ruby was acting strange, I needed to have a little laugh. I appreciate your very kind comments for it and for having a little fun with me.
Thank you again, my dear friend.

Comment from Goodadvicechan

Excellent

This is a lovely story telling how Patch and Rudy handle the same move.

Pets are the same as human beings. They have their own behavior , thinking , habits etc

You did a good job sharing with us how Rudy reacts to the move.

Thank you

 Comment Written 14-Sep-2023

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reply by the author on 14-Sep-2023

Hi Chan, I thank you so much for this kind review and comments for my Patch and Ruby poem.
After Kenzie said they were moving and Ruby was acting strange, I needed to have a little laugh. I appreciate your very kind comments for it and for having a little fun with me.
Thank you again, my dear friend.

Comment from davisr (Rhonda)

Exceptional

Hi Debi,
What a cute poem about two sweet kitties! Patches has just recovered from her moving ordeal, and is able to share her adventures in moving land. How cute of you to give both girls a poem together.
Have a great rest of your week.
Hugs,
Rhonda

 Comment Written 13-Sep-2023

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reply by the author on 14-Sep-2023

Rhonda, I thank you so much for this kind review and comments for my Patch and Ruby poem.
After Kenzie said they were moving and Ruby was acting strange, I needed to have a little laugh. I appreciate your very kind comments for it and for having a little fun with me.
Thank you again, my dear friend.

reply by the author on 14-Sep-2023

Oops- and for sure I can't forget your gracious six stars! You are awesome, sweetie!!!!

Comment from Pam (respa)

Excellent

Thanks for sharing the pictures, notes, and poem, Debi. Both are lovely cats. You set up the situation very well in the first verse. Is Kenzie getting her own apartment? I thought she was younger. I like your line about who wears the pants and who wears the dress!

The next verse is very good about how the cats can zoom and became friends, and also decided on a plan of action with the "circle each missus wears on her hand." Ruby is very astute and knew just where to hide the circle. The last two closing lines are very good, too!!

Very well done!!

 Comment Written 13-Sep-2023

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reply by the author on 14-Sep-2023

Hi Pam. I thank you so much for this kind review and comments for my Patch and Ruby poem.
After Kenzie said they were moving and Ruby was acting strange, I needed to have a little laugh. I appreciate your very kind comments for it and for having a little fun with me.
Thank you again, my dear friend.

reply by Pam (respa) on 14-Sep-2023

You are very welcome, Debi. Is Kenzie moving or was that just something fun for the kitty?

reply by the author on 14-Sep-2023

Yes, she's moving. So Lol, you might say, based on a true story.

reply by Pam (respa) on 14-Sep-2023

Will she be far away from you, or is she already?

reply by the author on 14-Sep-2023

No actuallyshe is just moving across the same City to an apartment, they couldn't afford the house any longer. But I found it to sound so familiar (like Helen?s stories) when she told me about Ruby? nervous actions.
So to do the poem was a no brainer. Lol

reply by Pam (respa) on 15-Sep-2023

Thanks for sharing, Debi, and I can see why it sounded familiar.