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Comment from barbara.wilkey
Not sure at all what's going on in this poem. It doesn't seem coherent. It seems you're in a bad way. Will pray.
Cause this eye now do implore! (Eye??)
Butt...(But)
reply by the author on 11-Sep-2023
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Not sure at all what's going on in this poem. It doesn't seem coherent. It seems you're in a bad way. Will pray.
Cause this eye now do implore! (Eye??)
Butt...(But)
Comment Written 11-Sep-2023
reply by the author on 11-Sep-2023
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Cause this I now do implore..(Butt) another word for derriere)
Thanks,
Doctor Ricky
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
It sounds like you are rather lost in this write Ricky and exposed to the elements. I hope you find some peace among the flowers, a fine share, love Dolly x x x
reply by the author on 11-Sep-2023
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It sounds like you are rather lost in this write Ricky and exposed to the elements. I hope you find some peace among the flowers, a fine share, love Dolly x x x
Comment Written 11-Sep-2023
reply by the author on 11-Sep-2023
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Peace among the flowers is a very good title.
Peace for Doctor Ricky is another story.
Thanks,
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Comment from Barry Penfold
Plenty of passion in this one. A plea to be rescued. Ricky do you really need to be rescued? Take care and have a wonderful day. Lots of writing yet to come.
Regards
Barry Penfold
reply by the author on 11-Sep-2023
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Plenty of passion in this one. A plea to be rescued. Ricky do you really need to be rescued? Take care and have a wonderful day. Lots of writing yet to come.
Regards
Barry Penfold
Comment Written 11-Sep-2023
reply by the author on 11-Sep-2023
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When it comes to being rescued??
Too far lost for that but you never know?
Thanks,
Stay tuned
Doctor Ricky 1024