Comment from Gypsy Blue Rose

Excellent

Excellent entry for the 20 Syllables writing prompt contest. I love the angel theme.

I like the presentation too. Concrete images easy to visualize.

Good syllables count and connection between lines.

Good luck in the contest.

Gypsy
"Poetry heals the wounds inflicted by reason" -- Novalis

 Comment Written 11-Sep-2023

Comment from Lauren Scott

Average

I love the feelings of deep and never-ending love and hope in those lines! Such a beautiful illustration to show the angel. Not sure about the punctuation.

 Comment Written 10-Sep-2023

Comment from Alexandra Trovato

Excellent

This is an excellent 20 syllable poem. I enjoyed reading it. Your presentation is good. You use descriptive words that draw in a reader.

Best wishes!

Alexandra

 Comment Written 10-Sep-2023

Comment from Boogienights

Excellent

This is lovely, what a great image. I truly believe that there are angels that watch over us...my sister is one. This is a very nice contest entry, best of luck.

 Comment Written 10-Sep-2023

Comment from jim vecchio

Excellent

This is another expert use of twenty syllables. A beautiful image, also. There are so many ways poets have put that small amount of words to use. I thank you for this contribution to the contest.

 Comment Written 10-Sep-2023

Comment from Eleri

Excellent

This poem has the required number of syllables for the contest and is based on a beautiful idea. It reads well and I love the way that you have paid it out. Good luck in the contest
Eleri

 Comment Written 10-Sep-2023

Comment from JSD

Excellent

Nicely fitting into the contest brief. You have the syllables just right and this is a sweet and touching little piece of poetry. Well done and good luck.

 Comment Written 10-Sep-2023