Comment from karenina

Excellent

It is such a joy to read your work. Your meaning comes through perfectly, with a kiss of wit and always, always bringing introspection! In a few more weeks we'll be seeing this!

Karenina

 Comment Written 10-Sep-2023

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reply by the author on 11-Sep-2023

K,

Always am thrilled with your comments about my poems. Still holding out for more Summer weather. Autumn colors can wait their turn.

Mark

reply by karenina on 11-Sep-2023

Oh, I suppose... But seasonally warm would be most welcome after these ninety degree days!

Comment from Bill Schott

Excellent

This 5-7-6, The Start of Autumn, brings the color transition to the fore and sends the readers into the fall season with the orange of late autumn.

 Comment Written 10-Sep-2023

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reply by the author on 11-Sep-2023

Thanks Bill for your review and support for my short stuff.

Mark

Comment from jim vecchio

Excellent

Your words accurately depicted the message in the illustration (or the other way around!) Pretty soon it'll be the leaf blower rather than lawn mower. Thank you for reminding me I'm one season older.

 Comment Written 10-Sep-2023

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reply by the author on 11-Sep-2023

Jim,

The trick about your leaves - use the lawnmower to cut the grass short. Somehow, your leaves will then find the lawns that have taller grass. LOL The leaf blower is just a temporary fix (-;

Mark

Comment from Sally Law

Excellent

Darn those lawnmowers! They certainly disturb the beautiful quiet scene of fallen leaves. A love,haiku of my favorite season. Sending you my best today as always and best wishes for the upcoming contest.
Sal :))

 Comment Written 10-Sep-2023

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reply by the author on 11-Sep-2023

Thanks Sal for your review of my seasonal post.

Mark