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Viewing comments for Chapter 18 "~ Children of the Night ~"
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Comment from Douglas Goff
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Oh my, my, my what a tasty piece. This one made me hungry...and afraid. Pictures were perfect to match the horror theme.

Here is another fifteen.
Douglas

 Comment Written 23-Mar-2024


reply by the author on 24-Mar-2024
    I owe you :)

    Thank you very much, Douglas... I really appreciate it...

    Gypsy hugs
    "For the world you are just one person, but to one person you are the world"
reply by Douglas Goff on 24-Mar-2024
    You owe me nothing. We are friends.
reply by the author on 24-Mar-2024
    Thank you very much, my friend
Comment from jim vecchio
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Since I was a little kid, I've loved late night monster movies. They seem now to be a thing of the past, and the closest I have to settle for is Svengoolie. But, I would love to hold tht hand, especially if it's full of candy!

 Comment Written 11-Sep-2023


reply by the author on 12-Sep-2023
    I love horror movies. I just watched the exorcist again. It's amazing how good were the special effects for the 70s.

    Thank you very much for your excellent review and kind words.

    Gypsy hugs
reply by jim vecchio on 12-Sep-2023
    That movie put such a scare into me in the 70's that I don't think I'll ever forget it!
Comment from JSD
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An unusual one for you, Gypsy. Different style and I'm not sure it is as assured as your gentle, softer work. The last line is quite jarring, although the fun of 'sticky treats' and the sleepover idea is enjoyable. Sorry!

 Comment Written 10-Sep-2023


reply by the author on 10-Sep-2023
    LoL. Dont be sorry. It's alright. I meant to be a little naughty.


    I used to write horror poems with Dean Kuch, the king of horror in fanstory. We were pretty close. He loved Halloween. I was thinking about him so I wrote this one. He died in 2017. I don't know if you knew him.

    Thank you very much for your excellent review and kind words. Anyway... I like to keep it interesting and cover different styles.

    Gypsy
reply by JSD on 10-Sep-2023
    I don't know anyone! I've only been here three months! Glad I didn't offend you!
reply by the author on 10-Sep-2023
    No, not at all. :)
Comment from aryr
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That was some quote from Bram Stoke, Dracula, Gypsy. I enjoyed the dual pictures. Your words showed that Dracula was indeed alive and enjoying his delights. Blessed Be n Hugs!!!

 Comment Written 09-Sep-2023


reply by the author on 09-Sep-2023
    Thank you very much, Aryr. I am happy you like horror too. I appreciate that you took the time to read it. Thank you for the exceptional six stars review. May you have a wonderful day. Blessed be.

    Gypsy hugs
reply by aryr on 09-Sep-2023
    You are so very welcome, Gypsy.
Comment from Bill Schott
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This poem, Children of the Night, reminds me that Halloween is fast approaching, and it will time to haul out the old horror flicks and talk my wife into watching one.

 Comment Written 09-Sep-2023


reply by the author on 09-Sep-2023
    Thank you very much for your excellent review and kind words.

    Gypsy hugs
Comment from shelley kaye
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read the title... my first thought was richard marx's song of the same name :-P

anyway, cool free spirit verse
good imagery and smooth flow

thank you for sharing
shelley :)


 Comment Written 09-Sep-2023


reply by the author on 09-Sep-2023
    Thank you very much for your excellent review and kind words.

    Children of the night is a quote from Bram Stoker's Dracula.
Comment from barbara.wilkey
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Bold artwork and bold poem. I enjoyed reading. I imagined the scary movies would go into some sensual, but innocent hugging. LOL The fangs are a deal breaker. This is a wonderful presentation and perfect for the upcoming Halloween.

 Comment Written 09-Sep-2023


reply by the author on 09-Sep-2023
    Thank you very much for your excellent review and kind words.

    Gypsy hugs
Comment from royowen
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Heh heh. Good job with this, I've always admired your presentation, and this is no exception, excellent theme and narrative, a very good job my friend well done, blessings Roy

 Comment Written 09-Sep-2023


reply by the author on 09-Sep-2023
    Thank you very much for your excellent review and kind words.

    Gypsy hugs
Comment from l.raven
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Hi Marival, your poem made me smile...
here I'm thinking a couple in love...watching
some scary movies in the night...and here she's
dating Dracula...

I think Dean would be honored my wonderful friend...
before I even read it was for Dean...he came to might...

I love your poem sweet girl...and your pictures...PERFECT...
very well written you...Linda xxoo

 Comment Written 08-Sep-2023


reply by the author on 08-Sep-2023
    Hello, Linda, how are you? This story has a twist... it's from the girl's prospective.... she is a vampire. LoL
    Thank you very much. I'm getting into the Halloween spirit, dean loved Halloween.

    Love xoxo

    Marival
reply by l.raven on 12-Sep-2023
    Hi Marival, your so very welcome beautiful you...
    and yes he did...but truly...he was the King Of Horror....I miss him...I knew
    he was sick...just not how bad...
    enjoy his favorite holiday you...love you much...xxoo
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
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This is rather scary and your pictures are bold too. A spooky write for Halloween, I'm not a fan of horror movies, but this reminded me to not watch or read anything spooky before sleep, ha ha ha, love Dolly x

 Comment Written 08-Sep-2023


reply by the author on 08-Sep-2023
    Thank you, dolly