Hang On To Your Dreams
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Comment from Eleri
This is a nice idea but surely it depends what your dreams are like! Just being flippant here as this is a great monostitch poem that reads well. In the UK we would probably say dreamt rather than dreamed but your version is fine. I wish you all the best in the contest
Eleri
reply by the author on 09-Sep-2023
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This is a nice idea but surely it depends what your dreams are like! Just being flippant here as this is a great monostitch poem that reads well. In the UK we would probably say dreamt rather than dreamed but your version is fine. I wish you all the best in the contest
Eleri
Comment Written 09-Sep-2023
reply by the author on 09-Sep-2023
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Thank you!
Comment from rspoet
This is an excellent entry for the one line contest. Hard work often leads to success which helps to make dreams come. Then one must be open to the opportunity.
Well done.
Good luck in the contest.
Robert
reply by the author on 08-Sep-2023
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This is an excellent entry for the one line contest. Hard work often leads to success which helps to make dreams come. Then one must be open to the opportunity.
Well done.
Good luck in the contest.
Robert
Comment Written 08-Sep-2023
reply by the author on 08-Sep-2023
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Thank you !!
