Hand-n-Hand.
Chillin' Out In The Foamy Sand...3 total reviews
Comment from tempeste
Men get distracted all the time..
I think a pair of blinkers would be handy
to keep them from looking sideways.
No eye wandering .
( biggrin)
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Men get distracted all the time..
I think a pair of blinkers would be handy
to keep them from looking sideways.
No eye wandering .
( biggrin)
Comment Written 09-Sep-2023
Comment from JSD
A lovely snippet from your loving relationship. Well done. As usual the dialogue is natural and authentic, with a dash of welcome humour. Economically and skilfully composed.
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A lovely snippet from your loving relationship. Well done. As usual the dialogue is natural and authentic, with a dash of welcome humour. Economically and skilfully composed.
Comment Written 08-Sep-2023
Comment from Alexandra Trovato
LOL This is an excellent humor poem. I enjoyed reading it. Your entire presentation is good. You use descriptive words that draw in a reader and authentic dialogue.
Best wishes!
Alexandra
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LOL This is an excellent humor poem. I enjoyed reading it. Your entire presentation is good. You use descriptive words that draw in a reader and authentic dialogue.
Best wishes!
Alexandra
Comment Written 08-Sep-2023