Comment from Katie Mae Dead

Excellent

This is really, really good Gypsy! Your pacing is what I love best. And the repeated phrase and I will love you all the time. You really managed to develop the authors personality in such a short poem.
Bravo Gypsy
Luv&stuff ,
Katiemaedead

 Comment Written 09-Sep-2023

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reply by the author on 09-Sep-2023

Thank you very much for your excellent review and kind words.

Marival

Comment from Mike Stevens

Excellent

Another fine poem, Gypsy....this is the way I always believed love was supposed to work but reality bulldozed me over, putting up strip mall where I used to stand

 Comment Written 08-Sep-2023

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reply by the author on 08-Sep-2023

Thank you very much for taking the time to read and review my poem.

Gypsy hugs

Comment from barbara.wilkey

Excellent

This poem did make me smile. I can remember honestly feeling that same way. I just never put it into words. I am wondering how many other young women have felt that way. I am betting many. Thank you for sharing this beautifully creative poem with us.

 Comment Written 08-Sep-2023

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reply by the author on 08-Sep-2023

I thought of Seth and Emma a little. I like their old fashioned love story.

Thank you very much for taking the time to read and review my poem.

I think women's independence is a good thing but we lost something in the process.

Gypsy hugs

reply by barbara.wilkey on 08-Sep-2023

I agree. I like the idea of being independent, but... we lost the part of being feminine. The part that makes us different.

Comment from aryr

Excellent

This was a wonderful free versing and finding your muse, Gypsy. You titled it correctly. This was beautiful. I thought finding your muse was very fulfilling. This was inspirational and educational. Blessed Be n Hugs!!!

 Comment Written 08-Sep-2023

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reply by the author on 08-Sep-2023

Thank you very much for taking the time to read and review my poem. Blessed be.

Gypsy hugs

reply by aryr on 08-Sep-2023

Most welcome, Gypsy.

Comment from shelley kaye

Excellent

great free verse
liked the refrain and random rhyme
nice imagery and smooth flow from beginning to end

great entry for the prompt
thank you for sharing
shelley :)

 Comment Written 08-Sep-2023

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reply by the author on 08-Sep-2023

Thank you very much for taking the time to read and review my poem.

Rhymes happens sometimes naturally. If I mean to write in rhyme it's a mess. LoL

Gypsy hugs

reply by shelley kaye on 08-Sep-2023

yea... i get that lol

Comment from Jumbo J

Excellent

Hi Gypsy Queen,
I didn't find it silly at all... I didn't smile also.
I was lost in the loveliness of the imperfect-perfect.

Okay, on my third read I did break a smile as memories floated in from my own relationship in younger years... actually, I still get those little added treats of love in my lunchbox when I'm traveling by myself.

I loved the sentiment all the way through this poem... it's one of those eternal feelings that reminds 'one' of perfect pairings.

Okay, I may have smiled at... that time of the month, but then recoiled thinking about me walking on eggshells... hoping I wasn't going to be in the firing line.

Your last verse says it all, wraps it up in a beautiful azure blue bow.
I will love you all the time... can't help it, I'm a romantic at heart.

With our thoughts we create...
the perfect imperfection of love.

Warm regards,
James.

 Comment Written 07-Sep-2023

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reply by the author on 08-Sep-2023

I wrote this from a young and naive Gypsy. Hehe. Some parts are the way I loved my ex. I wrote love notes and tried to fulfilled his fantasies...it didn't work. Towards the end he told me to stop making his lunch.

I did cook pretty good though.

Thank you, James. I appreciate your kind feedback.

Abrazos

Marival
"We love because it's the only true adventure."
-- Nikki Giovanni

Comment from GWHARGIS

Excellent

This struck me as being written by a very young girl. When love is all you need and it's you and yours against the world. It wasn't silly at all. Seemed like a character study. Thanks for sharing. Gretchen

 Comment Written 07-Sep-2023

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reply by the author on 07-Sep-2023

Thank you very much, Gretchen, it means a lot to me, coming from you.

Gypsy hugs

Comment from jim vecchio

Excellent

You just described the type of woman any man would want. I found mine till covid got her. I hope you find your man and treat him just as your words depict. He will be very fortunate!

 Comment Written 07-Sep-2023

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reply by the author on 07-Sep-2023

Thank you very much for your excellent review and kind words.

Gypsy hugs

reply by jim vecchio on 07-Sep-2023

Hugs are due you for your great posts on this site!

Comment from lyenochka

Excellent

It did make me smile and I thought of you and how you loved your ex-husband who was not faithful and unworthy of such a beautiful love. Great job with the free verse!

 Comment Written 07-Sep-2023

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reply by the author on 07-Sep-2023

Thank you, big sister! I'm glad it made you smile. It's very silly.

Love xoxo

Marival