The Aspen Grove Murders
Viewing comments for Chapter 43 "The Aspen Grove Murders Epilogue"A Tommy Thompson Mystery
25 total reviews
Comment from poetwatch
Sally, I thought that with Fee's arrest, you had ended the story. It was good, but your Epilogue makes me want to move to Aspen Grove. :) Read it, and loved it just correct this typo. "Lieutenant Miles Jean-Baptiste, and his wife, Suzy, are looking for an home" Thank you for sharing. Bless you all in Angel Country.
reply by the author on 16-Sep-2023
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Sally, I thought that with Fee's arrest, you had ended the story. It was good, but your Epilogue makes me want to move to Aspen Grove. :) Read it, and loved it just correct this typo. "Lieutenant Miles Jean-Baptiste, and his wife, Suzy, are looking for an home" Thank you for sharing. Bless you all in Angel Country.
Comment Written 10-Sep-2023
reply by the author on 16-Sep-2023
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Thank you for the lovely review and generous stars, dear poet. I always do an eplilogue to tie up the story. I had a lot of characters in this one. Thank you, again, my friend. I am blessed.
Sal XOs
Comment from barbara.wilkey
I hate seeing this story end. All of your novels are extremely good, but I honestly believe this is your best. Thank you for sharing it with us and good luck with the publishing.
I had never seen the likes of this warrior angel, and answer to my desperate prayers. (and the answer)
reply by the author on 10-Sep-2023
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I hate seeing this story end. All of your novels are extremely good, but I honestly believe this is your best. Thank you for sharing it with us and good luck with the publishing.
I had never seen the likes of this warrior angel, and answer to my desperate prayers. (and the answer)
Comment Written 10-Sep-2023
reply by the author on 10-Sep-2023
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Thank you, Barbara! Some one just gave me a two on purpose! I appreciate you and the wonderful six. You're a doll and so supportive. Love and blessings.
Sal XOs
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You've got to be kidding. I checked her out, she joined in May, and it seems you the first person she reviewed. I would mention it to Tom. That's not at all right.
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Thank you, Barbara. No, my best protection is to mute her, which I did. She doesn't have manners, and I can't fix that. Hopefully she will learn over time. Bless you, dear.
Comment from Lauren Scott
The first few paragraphs were intriguing and then we got somewhat lost in the long list of names. It was difficult to follow and connect the dots. Perhaps, because it is out of context. Also, compared to how much attention was given to all the other named characters, it felt that the loss of a daughter was not portrayed as the deepest part of the story.
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reply by the author on 10-Sep-2023
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The first few paragraphs were intriguing and then we got somewhat lost in the long list of names. It was difficult to follow and connect the dots. Perhaps, because it is out of context. Also, compared to how much attention was given to all the other named characters, it felt that the loss of a daughter was not portrayed as the deepest part of the story.
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Comment Written 10-Sep-2023
reply by the author on 10-Sep-2023
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This is an epilogue! What an insult to a top ranked author. Please learn your reviewing manners! My god!
Comment from BethShelby
This was quite a story. There was a lot of characters in this one. I don't remember an angel in any your books I've read. In the epilogue you allowed the leading to do a recap of all that happened and tell a bit about each character. I enjoyed reading it. Congratulation on having so many books out there. You are amazing.
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reply by the author on 16-Sep-2023
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This was quite a story. There was a lot of characters in this one. I don't remember an angel in any your books I've read. In the epilogue you allowed the leading to do a recap of all that happened and tell a bit about each character. I enjoyed reading it. Congratulation on having so many books out there. You are amazing.
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Comment Written 10-Sep-2023
reply by the author on 16-Sep-2023
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Thank you for the excellent review and kind comments, my friend. I always have an eplilogue as my crime mysteries generally have a lot of characters. My new novella, Murder By Chocolate, will not. The first chapter was posted in June (in a first chapter contest) and required 2000 words. Chapter Two has about 800 words. It is more in the vein of a Miss Marple or Sherlock Holmes, and the chapters will be much shorter.
Sending you my best today as always.
Sal XOs
Comment from JSD
A cumulative 6 for you Sally, for the cumulative effect of your brilliant detective story, and for the amazing work you are doing in bringing your stories to the blind and partially sighted, as well as featuring a blind person in the stories, which must be so inspiring for the readers.
reply by the author on 13-Sep-2023
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A cumulative 6 for you Sally, for the cumulative effect of your brilliant detective story, and for the amazing work you are doing in bringing your stories to the blind and partially sighted, as well as featuring a blind person in the stories, which must be so inspiring for the readers.
Comment Written 10-Sep-2023
reply by the author on 13-Sep-2023
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Thank you for the lovely review and super six, John. I'm so honored and blessed. Thank you also for your many kindnesses to me.
Sending you my best today as always,
Sal XOs
