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South Carolina

Viewing comments for Chapter 17 "Carolina Sunrise"
Beautiful poetry written primarily in this state

3 total reviews 
Comment from barbara.wilkey
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Thank you for sharing this post with us. We were stationed at Fort Jackson, SC for a few years. I really enjoyed living there.

Yes she's rising, rising for me and you! (comma after 'yes')

 Comment Written 07-Sep-2023


reply by the author on 11-Sep-2023
    Thanks again Barbara for your review and Comments.
    Doctor Ricky
Comment from royowen
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Water is such a wonderful thing, considering it constitutes most of our makeup, this is beautifully written my friend Ricky, moonlight over the sea is marvellous, well done, blessings Roy

 Comment Written 07-Sep-2023


reply by the author on 11-Sep-2023
    Thanks Roy and much more on this book to come.
    Doctor Ricky 1024
reply by royowen on 11-Sep-2023
    Well done
Comment from JSD
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That's a lovely poem Ricky. Love the unforced rhyme and the internal rhyme adds another excellent layer. Is it wrong for me to feel a little British pride that the state was named after King Charles I in the early 1600s? Admittedly, he lost his head!

 Comment Written 07-Sep-2023


reply by the author on 11-Sep-2023
    Thanks JSD and Bless this evening 4 All.
    Doctor Ricky 1024