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Beautiful poetry written primarily in this state
3 total reviews
Comment from
barbara.wilkey
Thank you for sharing this post with us. We were stationed at Fort Jackson, SC for a few years. I really enjoyed living there.
Yes she's rising, rising for me and you! (comma after 'yes')
Comment Written 07-Sep-2023
reply by the author on 11-Sep-2023
Thanks again Barbara for your review and Comments.
Doctor Ricky
Comment from
royowen
Water is such a wonderful thing, considering it constitutes most of our makeup, this is beautifully written my friend Ricky, moonlight over the sea is marvellous, well done, blessings Roy
Comment Written 07-Sep-2023
reply by the author on 11-Sep-2023
Thanks Roy and much more on this book to come.
Doctor Ricky 1024
reply by royowen on 11-Sep-2023
Comment from
JSD
That's a lovely poem Ricky. Love the unforced rhyme and the internal rhyme adds another excellent layer. Is it wrong for me to feel a little British pride that the state was named after King Charles I in the early 1600s? Admittedly, he lost his head!
Comment Written 07-Sep-2023
reply by the author on 11-Sep-2023
Thanks JSD and Bless this evening 4 All.
Doctor Ricky 1024
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