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2023 Gypsy's Haiku

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Comment from AP Apgar
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I like your Haiku poem -Excellent picture presentation - good syllable count and flow - good connection with your picture of the rain water dripping from the eave gutter in the evening - love this kind of weather - listening to the rain - rocking chair on the porch - very nice - Good Job AP

 Comment Written 07-Sep-2023

reply by the author on 07-Sep-2023
    Thank you very much for your excellent review and kind words.

    Gypsy hugs
Comment from Verna Cole Mitchell
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This is another great one. The idea of the drops falling from the eaves being filled with autumn night is very creative. I guess you can tell I like your nature ones best. You have quite a deft hand with them.

 Comment Written 07-Sep-2023

reply by the author on 07-Sep-2023
    Thank you, haiku is about nature (*=*)

    Thank you very much for reading and reviewing my poem,

    Gypsy
Comment from barbara.wilkey
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Gorgeous picture and poem. I enjoy falling asleep listening to soft rain. I actually do remember what it sounds like, even though right now, it seems like an eternity since I've heard or seen it. LOL I am wondering if those raindrops flowing gently might not be tear.

 Comment Written 07-Sep-2023

reply by the author on 07-Sep-2023
    I love falling asleep lisening to the rain, too. It's not tears, it's about real raindrops.

    Thank you very much for reading and reviewing my poem,

    Gypsy
Comment from GWHARGIS
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I listen to autumn evening rain on YouTube to sleep at night. This made me think of that sound. This was a nice seasonal poem. Thank you for posting and helping me forget the ninety degree heat if only for a few moments. Gretchen

 Comment Written 07-Sep-2023

reply by the author on 07-Sep-2023
    Thank you very much for reading and reviewing my poem, blessed be.

    Gypsy
Comment from aryr
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What a great haiku, Gypsy. I really enjoyed the picture of the rain falling. It was a great haiku because it showed the difference between rain drips and rain falls. Blessed Be n Hugs!!!

 Comment Written 07-Sep-2023

reply by the author on 07-Sep-2023
    Thank you very much for reading and reviewing my poem, blessed be.

    Gypsy hugs
reply by aryr on 07-Sep-2023
    Most welcome, Gypsy.
Comment from shelley kaye
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hmm... how about "AN autumn night in each raindrop"?
eh... just a thought lol...

another well-written haiku with nice imagery...

thank you for sharing
shelley :)


 Comment Written 07-Sep-2023

reply by the author on 07-Sep-2023
    Thank you very much for reading and reviewing my poem, good suggestion.

    Gypsy hugs
Comment from Karen Cherry Threadgill
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Lovely picture, brilliant poem.----------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------Karen

 Comment Written 07-Sep-2023

reply by the author on 07-Sep-2023
    thank you
reply by Karen Cherry Threadgill on 07-Sep-2023
    U R welcome Karen
reply by Karen Cherry Threadgill on 07-Sep-2023
    U R welcome
Comment from lyenochka
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With the chill and the reflection of the autumn night, it says it so well that "autumn night is in in every raindrop. It's the autumn rain that really heralds the start of the fall season.

 Comment Written 06-Sep-2023

reply by the author on 06-Sep-2023
    Thank you very much,
    Big sister. (*=*)

    I appreciate your kind review and feedback.

    I got your greeting card today, thank you!!! It's lovely. You are so thoughtful.

    Love

    Marival
reply by lyenochka on 06-Sep-2023
    Sorry - I didn't have a better one. I bought some cards today of our town.

    Hugs!
reply by the author on 07-Sep-2023
    It was perfect, I have it on my little altar next to Atticus happy birthday card. It's so cute, with all the little mistakes a 5 years-old makes, and it opens from right to left... like Japanese cards and books
reply by the author on 07-Sep-2023
    It was perfect, I have it on my little altar next to Atticus happy birthday card. It's so cute, with all the little mistakes a 5 years-old makes, and it opens from right to left... like Japanese cards and books