2023 Gypsy's Haiku
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19 total reviews
Comment from Cindy Decker 2
Gypsy,
This is such a unique way if describing fallen one needles. You make a beautiful song for autumn.
Excellent short haiku, Gypsy.
Good luck.
Blessings,
Cindy
reply by the author on 09-Sep-2023
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Gypsy,
This is such a unique way if describing fallen one needles. You make a beautiful song for autumn.
Excellent short haiku, Gypsy.
Good luck.
Blessings,
Cindy
Comment Written 09-Sep-2023
reply by the author on 09-Sep-2023
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Thank you very much for your excellent review and kind words.
Gypsy hugs
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You?re welcome, Gypsy.
Hugs,
Cindy
Comment from Mark D. R.
Gypsy,
A very nice Haiku post! Do
like your ground tapestry concept. Your color scheme and artwork are paired perfectly with your verse.
Mark
reply by the author on 08-Sep-2023
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Gypsy,
A very nice Haiku post! Do
like your ground tapestry concept. Your color scheme and artwork are paired perfectly with your verse.
Mark
Comment Written 08-Sep-2023
reply by the author on 08-Sep-2023
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Thank you very much for taking the time to read and review my poem.
Gypsy hugs
Comment from AP Apgar
I like your Haiku poem about nature - Excellent picture presentation supported by the picture of pine cones - poem paints a picture of wind having blown the pine needles into a pile beneath a pine tree - good closing metaphor - ground's tapestry - for me at least, I would increase the size to 26 or so for the old folk! Good Job AP PS> No dash? Thanks ð??? Perfect size!!!
reply by the author on 07-Sep-2023
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I like your Haiku poem about nature - Excellent picture presentation supported by the picture of pine cones - poem paints a picture of wind having blown the pine needles into a pile beneath a pine tree - good closing metaphor - ground's tapestry - for me at least, I would increase the size to 26 or so for the old folk! Good Job AP PS> No dash? Thanks ð??? Perfect size!!!
Comment Written 07-Sep-2023
reply by the author on 07-Sep-2023
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Thank you very much for your excellent review and kind words.
Gypsy hugs
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
You are well into Autumn with the crisp wind and the falling debris from trees here and I enjoyed those fine descriptions, Britain is experiencing the heat we should have felt in the summer, love Dolly x x x
reply by the author on 07-Sep-2023
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You are well into Autumn with the crisp wind and the falling debris from trees here and I enjoyed those fine descriptions, Britain is experiencing the heat we should have felt in the summer, love Dolly x x x
Comment Written 07-Sep-2023
reply by the author on 07-Sep-2023
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Thank you very much for your excellent review and kind words.
Gypsy hugs
Comment from karenina
Yay! Pretty sure I get to be the fifteenth review here... I love it when I can boost a post to blue ribbons or ATB's. This is SOOOOO good! Teeny tiny font, which, I admit made me hit "Control +) on my laptop...but so worth it! Nobody evokes such detailed imagery in Haiku. You're the top!
Karenina
reply by the author on 07-Sep-2023
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Yay! Pretty sure I get to be the fifteenth review here... I love it when I can boost a post to blue ribbons or ATB's. This is SOOOOO good! Teeny tiny font, which, I admit made me hit "Control +) on my laptop...but so worth it! Nobody evokes such detailed imagery in Haiku. You're the top!
Karenina
Comment Written 07-Sep-2023
reply by the author on 07-Sep-2023
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Oh my God.... nobody told me till you. Thank you! I appreciate the push through to gain the ribbon. (*<>*)
Thank you very much for your excellent review and kind words.
Love xoxo
Marival
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Oh my God.... nobody told me till you. Thank you! I appreciate the push through to gain the ribbon. (*<>*) I wrote it and posted it using my phone.
Thank you very much for your excellent review and kind words.
Love xoxo
Marival
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My pleasure!
Comment from Pam (respa)
-Nice artwork and presentation, Gypsy.
-You wrote a good haiku with a good topic.
-Effective nature and seasonal imagery with
the "autumn wind" and pine needles.
-A very good satori line.
-Thanks for sharing it.
-I am planning to post for your
original topic of introducing yourself
as part of the women's club.
-I don't tend to share personal stuff,
but your idea encouraged me.
reply by the author on 07-Sep-2023
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-Nice artwork and presentation, Gypsy.
-You wrote a good haiku with a good topic.
-Effective nature and seasonal imagery with
the "autumn wind" and pine needles.
-A very good satori line.
-Thanks for sharing it.
-I am planning to post for your
original topic of introducing yourself
as part of the women's club.
-I don't tend to share personal stuff,
but your idea encouraged me.
Comment Written 07-Sep-2023
reply by the author on 07-Sep-2023
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I'm so happy that you are going to introduce yourself. I look forward to reading it.
Thank you very much for your excellent review and kind words.
Gypsy hugs
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You are very welcome, Gypsy, and I appreciate your reply.
Comment from Verna Cole Mitchell
This is another of my favorites of yours. I love the motion of the wind gathering the pine needles, but more than that. I love the line "for ground's tapestry."
reply by the author on 07-Sep-2023
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This is another of my favorites of yours. I love the motion of the wind gathering the pine needles, but more than that. I love the line "for ground's tapestry."
Comment Written 07-Sep-2023
reply by the author on 07-Sep-2023
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Thank you very much for reading and reviewing my poem,
Gypsy
Comment from barbara.wilkey
I can see you're ready for autumn. So am I. It's my favorite season with it's rich earthy colors and the cool air. We'll at least in some part of the US. Not so much in Texas. LOL Thank you for sharing your God given talent with us.
reply by the author on 07-Sep-2023
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I can see you're ready for autumn. So am I. It's my favorite season with it's rich earthy colors and the cool air. We'll at least in some part of the US. Not so much in Texas. LOL Thank you for sharing your God given talent with us.
Comment Written 07-Sep-2023
reply by the author on 07-Sep-2023
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Thank you very much for reading and reviewing my poem,
Gypsy
Comment from aryr
What a wonderful haiku, Gypsy. I loved the picture and the poem was so appropriate- I liked how you approved of a natures tapestry. Very well done and greatly enjoyed. Blessed Be n Hugs!!!
reply by the author on 07-Sep-2023
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What a wonderful haiku, Gypsy. I loved the picture and the poem was so appropriate- I liked how you approved of a natures tapestry. Very well done and greatly enjoyed. Blessed Be n Hugs!!!
Comment Written 07-Sep-2023
reply by the author on 07-Sep-2023
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Thank you very much for reading and reviewing my poem, blessed be.
Gypsy hugs
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Most welcome, Gypsy.
Comment from shelley kaye
two more weeks till autumn begins... then winter is just right around the corner!! :-)
this was a crispy, sticky little haiku with great imagery and smooth flow
thank you for sharing
shelley :)
reply by the author on 07-Sep-2023
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two more weeks till autumn begins... then winter is just right around the corner!! :-)
this was a crispy, sticky little haiku with great imagery and smooth flow
thank you for sharing
shelley :)
Comment Written 07-Sep-2023
reply by the author on 07-Sep-2023
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Thank you very much for reading and reviewing my poem,
Gypsy hugs