Comment from Isabel Fontes

Excellent

I had to reread the previous chapter to understand the rhythm before diving into the next, and now the action is in full swing.
I take my hat off to your creativity and imagination, Bill!

 Comment Written 11-Sep-2023

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reply by the author on 11-Sep-2023

Thank you, Isabel.

reply by Isabel Fontes on 11-Sep-2023

You are welcome, Bill.

Comment from JSD

Excellent

Oh no! I've read these in the wrong order. And it makes a difference. Damn. This is as varied and as mental as the rest of them. Excellent creation. Well done for continuing with this.

 Comment Written 10-Sep-2023

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reply by the author on 10-Sep-2023

Thank you, John

Comment from Faith Williams

Excellent

Rise above this type of infighting? There's a mauronic statement. Your writing is certainly more entertaining than the actual campaign. Mixed metaphors and all.

 Comment Written 08-Sep-2023

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reply by the author on 08-Sep-2023

Thank you, Faith

Comment from lyenochka

Excellent

Oh my! That graphic is perfect for this scene and not unlike the Republican Debate where everyone is throwing punches, well, verbally. Impressive poetry by AA even while wrestling!

 Comment Written 08-Sep-2023

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reply by the author on 08-Sep-2023

Thank you, Helen. Not to take away from AAs obvious gift, it's AB who is wrestling. : )

Comment from nomi338

Excellent

It kind of figures that within the midst of a free for all fight, a poem manages to break out. You really have to guard against those sneaky poets and their snarky poems.

 Comment Written 07-Sep-2023

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reply by the author on 07-Sep-2023

Muses !

Comment from BethShelby

Excellent

Am I wrong but is Ned's clone actually smarter than Ned? I thought clones were supposed to be less perfect than the original. I can't imagine Ned using words like mixed metaphors.

 Comment Written 07-Sep-2023

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reply by the author on 07-Sep-2023

Yes. GED is a genius. Well, I suppose anyone would be compared to Ned. Skar, Pons? clone, has more of an attitude.

Comment from Iza Deleanu

Excellent

Cute little slogan that must win the audience:"Zora : (steps in front of LorDee and addresses the crowd) Greetings men and women of color and all other associates. This is the beginning of the new world. THIS is a day when the balance of power in the world will begin to shift to those who can use it -- not abuse it."

 Comment Written 07-Sep-2023

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reply by the author on 07-Sep-2023

Thanks, Iza

Comment from Jasmine Girl

Excellent

The party goes one. It doesn't matter whether they will get elected or not as long as they are having fun. I like the internal rhyming in the song lyrics. It can have end rhyming, too.

Well done.

 Comment Written 07-Sep-2023

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reply by the author on 07-Sep-2023

Thanks, Lisa

Comment from jim vecchio

Excellent

A drunk politician stayed out all night once, trying to figure out where the sun was. Then, it dawned on him.
How many beer does it take to get a German politician drunk?-Ein Stein!
Chales Dickens walked into a bar and ordered a martini. The bartender asked, "Olive or twist?"
Some animals are smarter than humans. A lion would never drive drunk. But a Tiger Would

 Comment Written 06-Sep-2023

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reply by the author on 06-Sep-2023

How many punk rockers does it take to change a lightbulb?

Two. One to stand on a chair and one to kick it out from under him.

reply by jim vecchio on 06-Sep-2023

And Captain Spaulding has three chairs! (This comes from someone who got thrown out of a Marx Bros. festival years ago for having too much of a good time)

Comment from Barry Penfold

Excellent

You paint a bizarre picture and maybe not all that far away from the future truth. Interesting for sure and I will wait for the next edition.
Take care and have a great day.
Regards
Barry Penfold.

 Comment Written 06-Sep-2023

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reply by the author on 06-Sep-2023

Scene at a Third Party 4 and 5 are still paying.