You are my everything.
My love is everything to me, a gift.3 total reviews
Comment from Alexandra Trovato
This is an excellent poem. I enjoyed reading it. Your entire presentation is good. You use descriptive words that draw in a reader and give an authentic message.
Best wishes!
Alexandra
reply by the author on 08-Sep-2023
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This is an excellent poem. I enjoyed reading it. Your entire presentation is good. You use descriptive words that draw in a reader and give an authentic message.
Best wishes!
Alexandra
Comment Written 08-Sep-2023
reply by the author on 08-Sep-2023
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Thank you Alexandria! I really appreciate your review and opinions. Have a wonderful weekend!
TinaLeAnn Bice
Happi
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You're welcome. Have a good weekend too!
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
You make love sounds so innocent and desirable here and our thirst for it never ends. I enjoyed your words of love, romantic and kind, love Dolly x x x
reply by the author on 07-Sep-2023
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You make love sounds so innocent and desirable here and our thirst for it never ends. I enjoyed your words of love, romantic and kind, love Dolly x x x
Comment Written 06-Sep-2023
reply by the author on 07-Sep-2023
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Thank you Dolly for such a great review and such kind words. I appreciate you and I?m glad you liked it!
TinaLeAnn Bice
Happi
Comment from jim vecchio
Don't know if you're male or female, but were you female, I'd be honored to have these words penned about me. Thank you for a great capturing of what devoted love is.
One concern: the title "Your" should be "you're".
reply by the author on 05-Sep-2023
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Don't know if you're male or female, but were you female, I'd be honored to have these words penned about me. Thank you for a great capturing of what devoted love is.
One concern: the title "Your" should be "you're".
Comment Written 05-Sep-2023
reply by the author on 05-Sep-2023
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I?m female and thank you. He is always telling me my love for him is rare. He is my soul mate. I?m glad you liked it and I glad you spotted the mistake. Here lately if I use any type grammar without it being a period, these weird symbols show in my post and I?ve seen a few others have the same thing going on so I hope when I change it they don?t show.
TinaLeAnn Bice
Happi
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I've noticed that, too-there are gremlins on this site, as one reviewer told me.
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Lol lol lol so we don?t get them wet or feed after midnight haha 😂
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Like your poem, your words are a source of "beautiful energy"!
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Thank you Jim, this one was also to my twin flame, my better half. We love to write each other poems. So I appreciate that you appreciate the poem.
TinaLeAnn Bice
Happi
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My wife wasn't interested in writing, though she wanted me to write a book. She was the practical one.
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You should write that book!
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Mayb one day. When my wife died, and it looked like I might, also, my niece took over as Power of Attorney to assure my daughter would be taken care of. I wrote a play recently and she is collecting that and other of my writings and getting them published in a professional binding.
