Comment from Sanku

Excellent

Autumn aromas swirl through nighttime heat--I like this very much .I could not see the ble moon this time because our skies were totally cloudy
beautiful picture and good syllable count .all the best for the contest.

 Comment Written 08-Sep-2023

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reply by the author on 03-Aug-2024

Thanks for reviewing zanya

Comment from JSD

Excellent

A lovely depiction of season, time and scene. Personally - and I'm not an expert on these things - I feel that moon should not be on the second line. If it was 'Neath red harvest moon' in the first line, it would read better. But it's your poem, obviously. I love the scents swirling in a heat haze almost, and the link between harvest and autumn. Great stuff. Good luck.

 Comment Written 05-Sep-2023

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reply by the author on 29-Aug-2024

Thanks for reading and reveiwing and useful commentary Zanya

Comment from jim vecchio

Excellent

This was a beautiful image and captured well in both your words and the picture. Sad that it reminds many that summer has ended, but breathing the promise of harvest time.

 Comment Written 05-Sep-2023

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reply by the author on 29-Aug-2024

Thanks for reviewing - apology for tardy reply! Zanya

reply by jim vecchio on 29-Aug-2024

I'm always late! But I'm thankful to hear from you.