2023 Gypsy's Haiku
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8 total reviews
Comment from barbara.wilkey
Where I grew up in the Midwest, Illinois, my dad planted Kentucky Bluegrass in our yard. I was beautiful. Right now, with this drought, I'd be happy if my weeds were green. My yard is brown and crunches when walked on. We can't water because we're under water usage restrictions. However, I enjoyed reading your poem. The package was perfect.
reply by the author on 05-Sep-2023
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Where I grew up in the Midwest, Illinois, my dad planted Kentucky Bluegrass in our yard. I was beautiful. Right now, with this drought, I'd be happy if my weeds were green. My yard is brown and crunches when walked on. We can't water because we're under water usage restrictions. However, I enjoyed reading your poem. The package was perfect.
Comment Written 05-Sep-2023
reply by the author on 05-Sep-2023
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Thank you very much for your excellent review and kind words.
Gypsy
Comment from Karen Cherry Threadgill
Nice little poem. Pretty interesting picture, I never realized that bluegrass was that blue. you have never written a poem here I didn't like. So, look at my little poem "petted" and tell me what you think.
Karen
reply by the author on 05-Sep-2023
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Nice little poem. Pretty interesting picture, I never realized that bluegrass was that blue. you have never written a poem here I didn't like. So, look at my little poem "petted" and tell me what you think.
Karen
Comment Written 05-Sep-2023
reply by the author on 05-Sep-2023
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I reviewed the poem last month. It's really good and funny.
Thank you very much for your excellent review and kind words.
Gypsy
Comment from AP Apgar
I like your haiku poem- nice picture presentation- poem flows well - good syllable count -clear story line - winds - Kentucky blue grass - country music - sweet nothin's - 1959 or sixty- Brenda Lee- cool song - we used to sing along- lol even birds sang along- Good Job AP
reply by the author on 05-Sep-2023
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I like your haiku poem- nice picture presentation- poem flows well - good syllable count -clear story line - winds - Kentucky blue grass - country music - sweet nothin's - 1959 or sixty- Brenda Lee- cool song - we used to sing along- lol even birds sang along- Good Job AP
Comment Written 04-Sep-2023
reply by the author on 05-Sep-2023
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Thank you very much for your excellent review and kind words.
Gypsy
Comment from lyenochka
Oh I like it! You bring out the music even out of "sweet nothings" and the song of the wind playing "blue grass" in the fields. Great imagery throughout the poem!
reply by the author on 05-Sep-2023
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Oh I like it! You bring out the music even out of "sweet nothings" and the song of the wind playing "blue grass" in the fields. Great imagery throughout the poem!
Comment Written 04-Sep-2023
reply by the author on 05-Sep-2023
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Thank you very much big sister...so happy you like it.
Love
Marival
Comment from aryr
What a fantastic haiku, Gypsy. To find out that it whispered sweet nothings was wonderful. To find that bluegrass was more decorative even added the sweet nothings to the poem. Blessed Be n Hugs!!!
reply by the author on 04-Sep-2023
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What a fantastic haiku, Gypsy. To find out that it whispered sweet nothings was wonderful. To find that bluegrass was more decorative even added the sweet nothings to the poem. Blessed Be n Hugs!!!
Comment Written 04-Sep-2023
reply by the author on 04-Sep-2023
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Thank you very much for your excellent review and kind words. Blessed be.
Gypsy
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You are so welcome, my pleasure, Gypsy.
Comment from GWHARGIS
I used to think the wind was telling me things. I was really little and I would concentrate as hard as I could to hear whatever message it was. This was a lovely poem. Thank you for sharing. Gretchen
reply by the author on 04-Sep-2023
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I used to think the wind was telling me things. I was really little and I would concentrate as hard as I could to hear whatever message it was. This was a lovely poem. Thank you for sharing. Gretchen
Comment Written 04-Sep-2023
reply by the author on 04-Sep-2023
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Thank you very much for your excellent review and kind words.
Gypsy
Comment from royowen
One can imagine the wind whispering sweet nothings, as we know the winds are God's messengers, and the fire His servants, this is beautifully written Gypsy, blessings Roy
reply by the author on 04-Sep-2023
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One can imagine the wind whispering sweet nothings, as we know the winds are God's messengers, and the fire His servants, this is beautifully written Gypsy, blessings Roy
Comment Written 04-Sep-2023
reply by the author on 04-Sep-2023
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Thank you very much for your excellent review and kind words.
Gypsy
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Well done
Comment from shelley kaye
kinda tripped over the third line...
maybe: sweet nothing whispers -- "sweet nothingS whisper"?
or it could be just me lol
love the meandering wind - that sounds cool
nice pic and colours
thank you for sharing
shelley :)
reply by the author on 04-Sep-2023
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kinda tripped over the third line...
maybe: sweet nothing whispers -- "sweet nothingS whisper"?
or it could be just me lol
love the meandering wind - that sounds cool
nice pic and colours
thank you for sharing
shelley :)
Comment Written 04-Sep-2023
reply by the author on 04-Sep-2023
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Thank you very much for your excellent review and kind words. Good suggestion.
Gypsy