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The Sabbath

will one find a day of rest?

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Comment from shelley kaye
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nice nonet suite
interesting and thought-provoking

may i make a suggestion to put the nonet poems in a suite opposite each other? 9-1...1-9...9-1...etc... just a thought ;)

nice work and thank you for sharing
shelley :)

 Comment Written 08-Sep-2023

Comment from TPAC
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I believe this need more clarity, The historic thought, of the Jews, their tradition still, with the seventh day to rest. This suggestion is solely in my opinion prevailing this read. Hoping some of what I feel helps this read. You know your intent.

 Comment Written 08-Sep-2023