God's Gifts
A world of wonders4 total reviews
Comment from tempeste
Ciao mystery poet, you now have 6 votes.
I found your poem the closest to what I would have written ( I missed the deadline).
God gave us this beautiful planet to live on. The fauna and flora provide us with all we need to thrive well.
We are surrounded by much beauty which delights our senses. The sun that rises and sets each day, the moon and stars at night, the 4 seasons, vibrant flowers, verdant valleys, snow-capped mountains etc.
reply by the author on 03-Sep-2023
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Ciao mystery poet, you now have 6 votes.
I found your poem the closest to what I would have written ( I missed the deadline).
God gave us this beautiful planet to live on. The fauna and flora provide us with all we need to thrive well.
We are surrounded by much beauty which delights our senses. The sun that rises and sets each day, the moon and stars at night, the 4 seasons, vibrant flowers, verdant valleys, snow-capped mountains etc.
Comment Written 03-Sep-2023
reply by the author on 03-Sep-2023
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Thank you so much. I do wish I could have seen the one you were working on.
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Ciao!
I will finish it so when a contest about God's Gifts pops up again it will be ready.
Congratulations on your well-deserved win!
Keep safe!
Comment from Karen Cherry
Nice and sweet. The picture is a wonderful companion piece. A lot of the time folks just put up any old thing and call it a day. Your writing was smooth and fluid. You told your story in a different way, and I found it works. Good effort all around. Karen
reply by the author on 03-Sep-2023
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Nice and sweet. The picture is a wonderful companion piece. A lot of the time folks just put up any old thing and call it a day. Your writing was smooth and fluid. You told your story in a different way, and I found it works. Good effort all around. Karen
Comment Written 03-Sep-2023
reply by the author on 03-Sep-2023
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Thank you.
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
An uplifting write to remind us all to stay positive and keep our chin up and enjoy life, we only get one chance at it.
Just one suggestion for this line:
As I gaze about, I need (to) remember its true,
much enjoyed, love Dolly x x x
reply by the author on 02-Sep-2023
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An uplifting write to remind us all to stay positive and keep our chin up and enjoy life, we only get one chance at it.
Just one suggestion for this line:
As I gaze about, I need (to) remember its true,
much enjoyed, love Dolly x x x
Comment Written 01-Sep-2023
reply by the author on 02-Sep-2023
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Thank you. I'm glad you like it, and I did take your suggestion and added "to" where you pointed out that I should put it.
Comment from prettybluebirds
This is my favorite style of poetry. It is more like the old-fashioned rhyming poems that I learned in grade school. It should do well in the contest. Best of luck.
reply by the author on 01-Sep-2023
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This is my favorite style of poetry. It is more like the old-fashioned rhyming poems that I learned in grade school. It should do well in the contest. Best of luck.
Comment Written 01-Sep-2023
reply by the author on 01-Sep-2023
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Thank you. I do tend to write most of my poems in the old-fashioned way.
Since we've never met, I was curious enough to look at some of your writing and was more than impressed with your work. That makes me even happier with your review.
