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2023 Gypsy's Haiku

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Comment from Mary Vigasin
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You know what you have done! When we walk around the pond and hear the frogs, I am going to think only of amorous frogs.
Your words are delightful and fun.
Best wishes,
Mary

 Comment Written 02-Sep-2023


reply by the author on 02-Sep-2023
    hahaha .... somebody else said that

    Thank you for reading and reviewing my poem. I hope you are having a great weekend.

    Gypsy
Comment from barbara.wilkey
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My ADD kicked when I read 'frog legs'. Reason, this weekend when we zoomed with our son, Andrew, and his family he was making a shake with chia seeds. My husband swore he had frog eggs in it. I hope you can see the connection. Sorry, I will attempt to remain focused. Your poetry is too wonderful not to be focused on it.

 Comment Written 01-Sep-2023


reply by the author on 01-Sep-2023
    Hehe it's okay to let your mind wander. The 5-7-5 Poem brought a memory to your mind... that is how it's supposed to be.

    Thank you very much for your excellent review and kind words. Happy weekend. (*÷*)

    Gypsyp
Comment from shelley kaye
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i like the A and L alliteration
nice imagery with the frog legs and petals
smooth flow of words

thank you for sharing
shelley :)

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 Comment Written 01-Sep-2023


reply by the author on 01-Sep-2023
    Someone told me it's x rated. LoL

    Thank you very much for your excellent review and kind words. Happy weekend. (*÷*)

    Gypsy
Comment from AP Apgar
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I like your 5/7/5 poem- good picture presentation- good flow- good story line - frog swimming in the lotus pond - caressing then to wake up in the sunlight - good job AP

 Comment Written 01-Sep-2023


reply by the author on 01-Sep-2023
    Thank you very much for your excellent review and kind words. Happy weekend. (*÷*)

    Gypsy
reply by AP Apgar on 01-Sep-2023
    You Too! Hug
Comment from aryr
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I would never imagine you putting the two together, amorous and frog legs, Gypsy. But you did word this splendidly! The picture was delightful and I did see a frog amongst all the lotus leaves. Blessed Be n Hugs!!!

 Comment Written 01-Sep-2023


reply by the author on 01-Sep-2023
    Thank you very much for your excellent review and kind words. Happy weekend. (*÷*) blessed be.

    Gypsy
reply by aryr on 01-Sep-2023
    You are so very welcome, Gypsy.
Comment from Karen Cherry Threadgill
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You do so much with so little. Good work as per usual.@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@
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Karen

 Comment Written 01-Sep-2023


reply by the author on 01-Sep-2023
    Thank you very much for your excellent review and kind words. Happy weekend. (*÷*)

    Gypsy
reply by Karen Cherry Threadgill on 01-Sep-2023
    You are so sweet have a good weekend too. Karen
Comment from lyenochka
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I guess the froggy is in love with a lotus flower! I wonder if frogs do help pollinate some flowers. I googled it and there are tree frogs that do help with pollination! That's so cool.

 Comment Written 01-Sep-2023


reply by the author on 01-Sep-2023
    Thank you, big sister.

    Love

    Marival
Comment from jmdg1954
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Jeez. We're going to put an R rating on this one. No one under seventeen permitted!

You sure can put a spin on it... amorous frog legs, arousing petals,

All kidding aside, Gypsy, I loved it!

Cheers to making her ribbit!
John


 Comment Written 01-Sep-2023


reply by the author on 01-Sep-2023
    Cheers :) Thank you for reading and reviewing my poem. I appreciate your sense of humor.

    gypsy
Comment from GWHARGIS
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Okay, now I will never be able to look at a frog on a lotus or lily pad the same way again. Lol. This was a whole new view of something that happens all the time. Gretchen

 Comment Written 01-Sep-2023


reply by the author on 01-Sep-2023
    hahaha... thank you for reading and reviewing my silly poem. It's always good to hear from you.

    gypsy