2023 Gypsy's Haiku
Viewing comments for Chapter 45 "Amorous Frog Legs"x
9 total reviews
Comment from Mary Vigasin
You know what you have done! When we walk around the pond and hear the frogs, I am going to think only of amorous frogs.
Your words are delightful and fun.
Best wishes,
Mary
reply by the author on 02-Sep-2023
You know what you have done! When we walk around the pond and hear the frogs, I am going to think only of amorous frogs.
Your words are delightful and fun.
Best wishes,
Mary
Comment Written 02-Sep-2023
reply by the author on 02-Sep-2023
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hahaha .... somebody else said that
Thank you for reading and reviewing my poem. I hope you are having a great weekend.
Gypsy
Comment from barbara.wilkey
My ADD kicked when I read 'frog legs'. Reason, this weekend when we zoomed with our son, Andrew, and his family he was making a shake with chia seeds. My husband swore he had frog eggs in it. I hope you can see the connection. Sorry, I will attempt to remain focused. Your poetry is too wonderful not to be focused on it.
reply by the author on 01-Sep-2023
My ADD kicked when I read 'frog legs'. Reason, this weekend when we zoomed with our son, Andrew, and his family he was making a shake with chia seeds. My husband swore he had frog eggs in it. I hope you can see the connection. Sorry, I will attempt to remain focused. Your poetry is too wonderful not to be focused on it.
Comment Written 01-Sep-2023
reply by the author on 01-Sep-2023
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Hehe it's okay to let your mind wander. The 5-7-5 Poem brought a memory to your mind... that is how it's supposed to be.
Thank you very much for your excellent review and kind words. Happy weekend. (*÷*)
Gypsyp
Comment from shelley kaye
i like the A and L alliteration
nice imagery with the frog legs and petals
smooth flow of words
thank you for sharing
shelley :)
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reply by the author on 01-Sep-2023
i like the A and L alliteration
nice imagery with the frog legs and petals
smooth flow of words
thank you for sharing
shelley :)
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Comment Written 01-Sep-2023
reply by the author on 01-Sep-2023
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Someone told me it's x rated. LoL
Thank you very much for your excellent review and kind words. Happy weekend. (*÷*)
Gypsy
Comment from AP Apgar
I like your 5/7/5 poem- good picture presentation- good flow- good story line - frog swimming in the lotus pond - caressing then to wake up in the sunlight - good job AP
reply by the author on 01-Sep-2023
I like your 5/7/5 poem- good picture presentation- good flow- good story line - frog swimming in the lotus pond - caressing then to wake up in the sunlight - good job AP
Comment Written 01-Sep-2023
reply by the author on 01-Sep-2023
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Thank you very much for your excellent review and kind words. Happy weekend. (*÷*)
Gypsy
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You Too! Hug
Comment from aryr
I would never imagine you putting the two together, amorous and frog legs, Gypsy. But you did word this splendidly! The picture was delightful and I did see a frog amongst all the lotus leaves. Blessed Be n Hugs!!!
reply by the author on 01-Sep-2023
I would never imagine you putting the two together, amorous and frog legs, Gypsy. But you did word this splendidly! The picture was delightful and I did see a frog amongst all the lotus leaves. Blessed Be n Hugs!!!
Comment Written 01-Sep-2023
reply by the author on 01-Sep-2023
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Thank you very much for your excellent review and kind words. Happy weekend. (*÷*) blessed be.
Gypsy
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You are so very welcome, Gypsy.
Comment from Karen Cherry Threadgill
You do so much with so little. Good work as per usual.@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@
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Karen
reply by the author on 01-Sep-2023
You do so much with so little. Good work as per usual.@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@
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Karen
Comment Written 01-Sep-2023
reply by the author on 01-Sep-2023
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Thank you very much for your excellent review and kind words. Happy weekend. (*÷*)
Gypsy
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You are so sweet have a good weekend too. Karen
Comment from lyenochka
I guess the froggy is in love with a lotus flower! I wonder if frogs do help pollinate some flowers. I googled it and there are tree frogs that do help with pollination! That's so cool.
reply by the author on 01-Sep-2023
I guess the froggy is in love with a lotus flower! I wonder if frogs do help pollinate some flowers. I googled it and there are tree frogs that do help with pollination! That's so cool.
Comment Written 01-Sep-2023
reply by the author on 01-Sep-2023
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Thank you, big sister.
Love
Marival
Comment from jmdg1954
Jeez. We're going to put an R rating on this one. No one under seventeen permitted!
You sure can put a spin on it... amorous frog legs, arousing petals,
All kidding aside, Gypsy, I loved it!
Cheers to making her ribbit!
John
reply by the author on 01-Sep-2023
Jeez. We're going to put an R rating on this one. No one under seventeen permitted!
You sure can put a spin on it... amorous frog legs, arousing petals,
All kidding aside, Gypsy, I loved it!
Cheers to making her ribbit!
John
Comment Written 01-Sep-2023
reply by the author on 01-Sep-2023
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Cheers :) Thank you for reading and reviewing my poem. I appreciate your sense of humor.
gypsy
Comment from GWHARGIS
Okay, now I will never be able to look at a frog on a lotus or lily pad the same way again. Lol. This was a whole new view of something that happens all the time. Gretchen
reply by the author on 01-Sep-2023
Okay, now I will never be able to look at a frog on a lotus or lily pad the same way again. Lol. This was a whole new view of something that happens all the time. Gretchen
Comment Written 01-Sep-2023
reply by the author on 01-Sep-2023
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hahaha... thank you for reading and reviewing my silly poem. It's always good to hear from you.
gypsy