Grief
The loss of a loved one3 total reviews
Comment from Ellen C M Threatts
Heartwarming and raw. I can relate all too well. Nightmares and dread sum it all. It sounds like your grief experience is so fresh that time isn't moving fast enough.
reply by the author on 31-Aug-2023
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Heartwarming and raw. I can relate all too well. Nightmares and dread sum it all. It sounds like your grief experience is so fresh that time isn't moving fast enough.
Comment Written 31-Aug-2023
reply by the author on 31-Aug-2023
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Thanks Ellen.
Comment from JSD
A simple but well-crafted and meaningful poem, communicating a very important message, especially for young people. Well done and good luck in the competition. (No apostrophe needed in the fifth line.)
reply by the author on 31-Aug-2023
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A simple but well-crafted and meaningful poem, communicating a very important message, especially for young people. Well done and good luck in the competition. (No apostrophe needed in the fifth line.)
Comment Written 31-Aug-2023
reply by the author on 31-Aug-2023
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Thank you for reviewing and for spotting the typo.
Comment from LisaMay
You have captured this wrenching emotion of grief with clarity and accuracy. I know because it is gripping me at the moment through losing a beloved nearly 2 weeks ago. If this is autobiographical I send you sympathy and best wishes in your own loss.
reply by the author on 31-Aug-2023
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You have captured this wrenching emotion of grief with clarity and accuracy. I know because it is gripping me at the moment through losing a beloved nearly 2 weeks ago. If this is autobiographical I send you sympathy and best wishes in your own loss.
Comment Written 31-Aug-2023
reply by the author on 31-Aug-2023
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So sorry for your loss Lisa. This isn?t autobiographical. Thanks for reviewing. X