Depression
Cinquain Entry6 total reviews
Comment from Eleri
This poem certainly conveys the depths of depression well. It is dark and cold in its description just as deep depression can feel. I, therefore, wish you all the best in the competition
Eleri
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This poem certainly conveys the depths of depression well. It is dark and cold in its description just as deep depression can feel. I, therefore, wish you all the best in the competition
Eleri
Comment Written 31-Aug-2023
Comment from Debbie D'Arcy
A very poignant and well expressed verse about depression. I think you've captured the sensation of this dreadful, disarming emotion with sensitivity and accuracy. Your few words create memorable impact. Good luck in the contest! Debbie
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A very poignant and well expressed verse about depression. I think you've captured the sensation of this dreadful, disarming emotion with sensitivity and accuracy. Your few words create memorable impact. Good luck in the contest! Debbie
Comment Written 30-Aug-2023
Comment from royowen
Oh yes indeed, that is the way of alienating oneself from the pack, as it were. Hatred and unforgiveness is really what's destroying this world, you ate spot with this great entry, good luck, blessings Roy
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Oh yes indeed, that is the way of alienating oneself from the pack, as it were. Hatred and unforgiveness is really what's destroying this world, you ate spot with this great entry, good luck, blessings Roy
Comment Written 30-Aug-2023
Comment from Iza Deleanu
Surround - alone - never to see the light again, I like the contrast of these lines. Where there is darkness, the light will creep eventually and take over. Thank you for sharing and good luck with the contest.
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Surround - alone - never to see the light again, I like the contrast of these lines. Where there is darkness, the light will creep eventually and take over. Thank you for sharing and good luck with the contest.
Comment Written 30-Aug-2023
Comment from RodG
It is so difficult to describe Depression in a way others can understand what you're feeling. The Speaker her manages to do so, though the reader wonders what he hates. What you do especially well is SHOW how he's enveloped with darkness. Rod
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It is so difficult to describe Depression in a way others can understand what you're feeling. The Speaker her manages to do so, though the reader wonders what he hates. What you do especially well is SHOW how he's enveloped with darkness. Rod
Comment Written 30-Aug-2023
Comment from jim vecchio
Qs a man thinketh, so is he. Surround yourself with anything and you may become like them. Sounds like the Stockholm Syndrome! You'r4 not lone. I'll always be available to read your works!
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Qs a man thinketh, so is he. Surround yourself with anything and you may become like them. Sounds like the Stockholm Syndrome! You'r4 not lone. I'll always be available to read your works!
Comment Written 30-Aug-2023