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When He-Type met She-Type

A Twist on a Familiar Biblical Story

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Comment from BlueMarble
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So that's how it all really happened! I always had a feeling that there was something missing in the original, biblical version of that story. I really enjoyed reading this, and I was smiling through it all.

 Comment Written 31-Aug-2023

Comment from karenina
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Well! This was an original and witty take on the age-old tale! I love the way "he-type" was posturing and doing his best to impress the "she-type"--and likewise the "she-type" had her share of wit and slightly teasing sarcasm about her. Little did they know what that apple would bring! (Now we know!)

Clever!

Karenina

 Comment Written 29-Aug-2023

Comment from Dolly'sPoems
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And since that day men believe all women are temptresses and sinful. Ha ha ha. I enjoyed your rewriting of this biblical story Eugene, I was entertained, love Dolly x x x

 Comment Written 29-Aug-2023