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Wendy and Wayne's Wacky Wedding

Was a wacky situation all over the place

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Comment from Jessica Wheeler
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I can't believe I'm only just reading this. I just had to check it out after your review- I am blown away! While I appreciate your kind words and comments on my wedding write... I must bow down to the Queen of alliteration!! This is on another level, my talented friend!!!

I've been thinking of you so much lately. I had no idea you were going through that with the surgery- I am so sorry :( I'm always here. I would love to chat with you soon.

Xoxo
Jess

 Comment Written 01-Sep-2023


reply by the author on 02-Sep-2023
    You are so sweet. And I do miss you very much too. I am sorry too that I don't get over your way enough. I am thinking about slowing the writing down a bit by around the New Year, so I have more relaxed time here, publish a book and have more time for reviewing. My screen time is so limited, but I want to make sure I stay connected with those like you, who are so dear to me. I thought it to be so funny that since we had decided right from the beginning that we were so much alike, it shouldn't surprise me that you not only came up with the W words, but you also wrote about a wedding. And I thought it amazing how much yours made sense too and how lovely it was.
    You amaze me and I will try to be better at staying in touch better. Lotsa love and thank you for the honor of your six stars too.
Comment from Sanku
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I am sorry gremlins gobbled your great alliterative poem .I can't believe such things happen in this glitchy world.. so nothing is perfect
It was a fantastic effort ,Quite fun to read .I read it aloud laughing in between ...Thank you for sharing..

 Comment Written 01-Sep-2023

Comment from Bill Schott
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This poem, Wendy and Wayne's Wacky Wedding, presented with five wickedly written -- Wow! So many Ws Well done.........................................

 Comment Written 01-Sep-2023

Comment from K.L. Rockquemore
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What an ordeal!!
I'm glad it was remedied.

This verse is alliteration on steroids!!!
I didn't realize so many words beginning with "W", could be knitted so skillfully together.

It sounds like this entry wasn't submitted for the contest, if it had you would have won for sure.

Loved it!

 Comment Written 01-Sep-2023


reply by the author on 01-Sep-2023
    Hey Kitty, I am absolutely excited to know you are back. You were always one of my favorite reviewers and among my favorite people. So I am delighted to hear from you with this one. Thanks so much for your awesome comments for this wacky poem. I couldn't submit it after it ended up in everyone's portfolio, all the home page, voting booth. I took screen shots that night and it was the only piece anywhere. I was horrified, and as bad as I felt at the thought of me losing my portfolio, I was distraught at the thought of my friends losing there's too. I know it wasn't my fault, but since it was my piece, I felt pretty yucky about it. Thank God alls well that ends well. Lol...
    Thanks again and welcome back!
Comment from poetwatch
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Goodness, gracious gift of gab writers wonders why the weather changed, Debi. It must have taken you a while to write "when we witnessed Wayne win Wendy's warmth." It looks like a good wedding. Thank you for sharing this gem.

 Comment Written 01-Sep-2023


reply by the author on 01-Sep-2023
    Hahaha! Thanks for the vote of confidence. Yes, it did take a little work to make this come together, but all in all, it was kinda fun.
    Thanks for such a fun review and comments. Those are my favorite kind, my sweet friend.
Comment from lindafisher
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This is rather fun. Wendy hitting Wayne around the head with a wrench really made me smile. Thankfully Wayne is very forgiving, as is Wendy it seems.

 Comment Written 31-Aug-2023


reply by the author on 31-Aug-2023
    Hi Linda, I thank you so very much for your kind review and words for my silly W poem. I appreciate your fun comments too.
    So I thank you again, my dear friend.
Comment from Eric Langford1
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Talk about a wacky poem Debi, obviously why you have attained the dizzy heights of 2nd place. So, soooo imaginative which is what it's all about. Brillian.

 Comment Written 31-Aug-2023


reply by the author on 31-Aug-2023
    Eric, I thank you for your kind words for my W poem. Actually I didn't enter it in the contest after a glitch in the system put this poem as every post in the whole site. Lol... I was the only one anyone could read that night. It scared me so bad. Even tho I knew I hadn't done anything, I hated that my poem completely dominated this whole website so I figured there was no way I could be anonymous and dropped out. But you are so sweet and I do thank you for your kind comments, my friend.
Comment from Aussie
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Gremlins in Fanstory computers? A fun write, stupid really (with respect.) Who carries a wrench to a wedding? She must have been a tough tart. It's a wonder Wayne could see Wendy after she clubbed him.
Still, true love never runs smooth! K xx

 Comment Written 31-Aug-2023


reply by the author on 31-Aug-2023
    Now see here my Special K. LOL, I was running out of W words and the wedding hadn't started. However they finally forgave each other and all was well with Wendy and Wayne. However if you had seen your portfolio about 2:30AM my time, you wouldn't have liked either of the newly weds as every single post ever written was Wendy and Wayne. I was sick with worry that it was not going to be fixed. And I knew it wasn't my fault,, but it was my poem that took over the home page, the voting booth, you name it. Yes, gremlins is a good word for it. I am so relieved that it was fixed. I never did sleep that night as I was so scared of what was in all my friends portfolios. Now you see why I could not enter this in the contest. But it was a heck of a project so I didnt want to toss it either. So thank you so much my sweet Aussie friend. Love when I hear from you. I always get a chuckle and a smile after reading your reviews! HUGS!
reply by Aussie on 01-Sep-2023
    How goes your 👀 mine get a bit sore. I got new glasses and now I don't want to wear them. One has to see tho' did you see my latest write?
Comment from davisr (Rhonda)
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Awww, Debi, I'm sorry that happened to you, and your poem is so lovely! What a cute alliteration poem with all those W's. To be honest, it's hard to find W words, so you picked a challenge with this one. It would have gotten my vote!!!

Hugs,
Rhonda

 Comment Written 31-Aug-2023


reply by the author on 31-Aug-2023
    Rhonda, you are so very sweet. I thank you so much for this kind review and comments for my W poem. It was fun to do but still can't believe the chaos that it caused. I appreciate your very kind comments and your gracious six stars.
    Thank you again, my dear friend
reply by davisr (Rhonda) on 03-Sep-2023
    It was such a clever poem!! The only snafu I've had on here before was a poem I just put in and hadn't time to edit it, and it got released before I had a chance to smooth it out. It was so embarrassing, lol.
Comment from BethShelby
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This is so cute. Great alliteration. I think you must have used most of the dictionarys W words and they all made sense and it turnedf out to be good story with a happy ending. Thwy wedding turned out well in spite of wendy whacking Wayne for getting wasted at he wedding.

 Comment Written 31-Aug-2023


reply by the author on 31-Aug-2023
    Beth, you are so very sweet. I thank you so much for this kind review and comments for my W poem. It was fun to do but still can't believe the chaos that it caused. I appreciate your very kind comments.
    Thank you again, my dear friend