Wedded Wife
Wedding Write7 total reviews
Comment from BenThrone
This is an excellent alliterative poem Jessica. "W" is one of the letters I was considering, and you used it to great effect. "Wistful wedded wife" just rolls off the tongue so marvelously! Well done for this challenge.
reply by the author on 02-Sep-2023
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This is an excellent alliterative poem Jessica. "W" is one of the letters I was considering, and you used it to great effect. "Wistful wedded wife" just rolls off the tongue so marvelously! Well done for this challenge.
Comment Written 31-Aug-2023
reply by the author on 02-Sep-2023
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Thank you so much, Ben.
Xo
Comment from Debi Pick Marquette
How ironic that I would vote for this one and that it would be similar to mine. Only yours is soft and sweet, romantic and flows beautifully. It should have won. But like I said you did get my vote. Wonderful job on this lovely one!
Not sure if you had heard or seen that mine had to be taken out of the contest after a glitch in the sites system put my poem in every single post ever done on FS. Kinda hard to stay anonymous that way. It was devastating to see that even the voting booth was all my poem. Anyway yours is lovely, and should not surprise me that we both picked W and also wrote about weddings.
Sorry I don't get this way much as it is hard for me to review too much after both eye surgeries were unsuccessful. I miss seeing you, but will try to get this way more often. It seems to take all my screen time when writing and answering reviews. One more thing that we have in common. The first year I came here, I finished in 6th place and look where you are!! Coincidence? I think not. We have had this connection since the minute you arrived. Anyway I miss you!
And once again. Great job on this.
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How ironic that I would vote for this one and that it would be similar to mine. Only yours is soft and sweet, romantic and flows beautifully. It should have won. But like I said you did get my vote. Wonderful job on this lovely one!
Not sure if you had heard or seen that mine had to be taken out of the contest after a glitch in the sites system put my poem in every single post ever done on FS. Kinda hard to stay anonymous that way. It was devastating to see that even the voting booth was all my poem. Anyway yours is lovely, and should not surprise me that we both picked W and also wrote about weddings.
Sorry I don't get this way much as it is hard for me to review too much after both eye surgeries were unsuccessful. I miss seeing you, but will try to get this way more often. It seems to take all my screen time when writing and answering reviews. One more thing that we have in common. The first year I came here, I finished in 6th place and look where you are!! Coincidence? I think not. We have had this connection since the minute you arrived. Anyway I miss you!
And once again. Great job on this.
Comment Written 31-Aug-2023
Comment from royowen
What a beautiful composed alliterative poem, dedicated to the wedded wife, you've cleverly kep this to every word and being with the letter W, beginning each word, well done, great post, well done, blessings Roy
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What a beautiful composed alliterative poem, dedicated to the wedded wife, you've cleverly kep this to every word and being with the letter W, beginning each word, well done, great post, well done, blessings Roy
Comment Written 29-Aug-2023
Comment from Karen Cherry Threadgill
After Debi's W's You were brave to try. And you succeeded masterfully. This was warmhearted, wistful, and wonderful.**********************************************************************************************************************
Karen
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After Debi's W's You were brave to try. And you succeeded masterfully. This was warmhearted, wistful, and wonderful.**********************************************************************************************************************
Karen
Comment Written 29-Aug-2023
Comment from Pam Lonsdale
This is the second poem of alliteration using all 'W' words - there must be a lot of them:-)
Thinking back to my wedding day, there was warm weather, lots of wedding wishes, I word white, and I was a wistful wedded wife.
Thanks for bringing back those memories with your fine poem.
Good luck in the contest.
Pam
reply by the author on 11-Sep-2023
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This is the second poem of alliteration using all 'W' words - there must be a lot of them:-)
Thinking back to my wedding day, there was warm weather, lots of wedding wishes, I word white, and I was a wistful wedded wife.
Thanks for bringing back those memories with your fine poem.
Good luck in the contest.
Pam
Comment Written 29-Aug-2023
reply by the author on 11-Sep-2023
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Thank you so much!!
Xo
Jessica
Comment from Alexandra Trovato
This is an excellent poem. I enjoyed reading it. Your entire presentation is good. You use descriptive words with W that draw in a reader with imagery.
Best wishes!
Alexandra
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This is an excellent poem. I enjoyed reading it. Your entire presentation is good. You use descriptive words with W that draw in a reader with imagery.
Best wishes!
Alexandra
Comment Written 29-Aug-2023
Comment from Debbie D'Arcy
A difficult brief which you seem to have skilfully fulfilled adding flow and meaning to this alliteration. I don't think you've repeated a word and conveyed a wonderful "wedding write" with style and atmosphere. Well done and good luck! Debbie
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A difficult brief which you seem to have skilfully fulfilled adding flow and meaning to this alliteration. I don't think you've repeated a word and conveyed a wonderful "wedding write" with style and atmosphere. Well done and good luck! Debbie
Comment Written 29-Aug-2023
