Comment from Teri7

Excellent

This is a very well written haiku you have penned. You used very good descriptive words and great imagery from the art work you chose Thank you for sharing! love and blessings, Teri

 Comment Written 29-Aug-2023

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reply by the author on 29-Aug-2023

Thank you very much for taking the time to read and review my poem.

Gypsy

Comment from barbara.wilkey

Excellent

I am pretty sure the raven isn't happy, but the pelican is joyous. I can see him doing a happy dance at the raven expense. I enjoyed reading this poem. You again presented a beautiful package.

 Comment Written 29-Aug-2023

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reply by the author on 29-Aug-2023

You have a great imagination. Thank you very much for your excellent review and kind words.

Gypsy

Comment from shelley kaye

Excellent

LOL! worm can't win!

loved this raven and pelican haiku
great imagery and smooth flow
cool colours and pics, too

thank you for sharing
shelley :)

 Comment Written 29-Aug-2023

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reply by the author on 29-Aug-2023

Thank you very much for your excellent review and kind words.

Gypsy

Comment from Katherine M. (k-11)

Excellent

I find it very clever that you have adapted the latin saying incidit in scyllam cupiens vitare charybdim into a Haiku with an authentic Japanese feel. Much enjoyed, kay

 Comment Written 29-Aug-2023

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reply by the author on 29-Aug-2023

Thank you very much for your excellent review and kind words.

Gypsy

Comment from AP Apgar

Excellent

I like your haiku poem- good picture presentation- good- clever story - frying pan into the fire- poor old worm just can't win- pelican probably better odds ? good job AP

 Comment Written 28-Aug-2023

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reply by the author on 28-Aug-2023

Thank you very much for your excellent review and kind words.

Gypsy

Comment from GWHARGIS

Excellent

This was a very unique poem. I could see the worm lucky to escape the raven, only to fall into the open bill of the pelican. Great poem that shows it can always get worse. Thanks for sharing. Gretchen

 Comment Written 28-Aug-2023

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reply by the author on 29-Aug-2023

Thank you very much for your excellent review and kind words.

Gypsy

Comment from lyenochka

Excellent

Lol. Poor worm! It's like the old saying "out of the frying pan into the fire." I guess in the pelican's bill, he'll be swallowed whole and won't suffer too long.
I wondered if you meant "escapes" ? Maybe put an apostrophe to show the missing "e" ?

 Comment Written 28-Aug-2023

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reply by the author on 29-Aug-2023

I fixed it. Thank you, big sister ❤️ I hope you are having a restful week.

Love

Marival

Comment from jim vecchio

Excellent

I love it and also dread it when one of your poems appears. Love it because there is so much to admire with your words and colorful presentation and dread it because I feel I always learn from you but find it difficult to offer any positive suggestions, just amazement nd flattery.

 Comment Written 28-Aug-2023

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reply by the author on 29-Aug-2023

No problem, just write your true opinion, feelings, thoughts, etc. You can add a signature, like your first name and a quote you like.

Example

Gypsy
"We are not meant to be perfect. We are meant to be whole." - Oprah Winfrey.

It's hard because fanstory forces long reviews and sometimes you don't have much to say.

Thank you very much for your excellent review and kind words.

Gypsy

reply by jim vecchio on 29-Aug-2023

I will bow to your suggestions!
?There is no greater agony than bearing an untold story inside you.?
― Maya Angelou, I Know Why the Caged Bird Sings

reply by the author on 30-Aug-2023

Perfect quote. Love Maya Angelo

reply by jim vecchio on 30-Aug-2023

Good. Now I know how to respond to your wonderful works!