Comment from Dolly'sPoems

Excellent

This is a delightful write, love the rich alliteration and the story is Heaven sent. Good luck with the contest, you won my vote here, glad you mentioned Hoopoes as I photographed one recently, love Dolly x x x

 Comment Written 30-Aug-2023

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reply by the author on 30-Aug-2023

I thought the bird lovers would like this one. Thank you so much.

Comment from jim vecchio

Excellent

Hesitating, hypercorrecting,
Hospitality hindered, hurricane heralded
Heavyweight horsemen humiliate hippos
Humming hypnotic holiday hints horizontally
Having headshrinkers hypothesize heartfelt happenings
Honoring homesick hillbillies
Hiding homicidal handymen's hickeys,
Hopeful hallucinogenic harpsichordists,
Housebound, hardheaded, heed horticulturists

 Comment Written 28-Aug-2023

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reply by the author on 30-Aug-2023

Another "H" person!! Hahaha

reply by jim vecchio on 30-Aug-2023

Hardly!

Comment from jessizero

Excellent

Your alliteration story was impressive. I didn't catch any errors, and it was cute. Thank you so much for sharing this here, and best wishes to you.

 Comment Written 28-Aug-2023

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reply by the author on 28-Aug-2023

Thank you for your encouragement.