2023 Gypsy's Tanka
Viewing comments for Chapter 32 "Wanderlust"-
8 total reviews
Comment from Mark Schardine
The German word "wandern" has many meanings, and here we cannot help but see as a never-ending sorrowful circular motion, regardless of the desires that motivate it.
reply by the author on 04-Sep-2023
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The German word "wandern" has many meanings, and here we cannot help but see as a never-ending sorrowful circular motion, regardless of the desires that motivate it.
Comment Written 04-Sep-2023
reply by the author on 04-Sep-2023
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Thank you very much for your excellent review and kind words.
Gypsy
Comment from Jumbo J
Hi Gypsy Queen,
I found it!
I'm not sure if it's because of your reference to 'wanderlust', but I feel this Tanka doesn't end... it's like it's on a continuous journey of never being able to connect... How clever of you!
The visual delight painted so deftly within your words held me firmly within its grip.
The way it could be adapted to two humans that were out of sync with each others timing, or that in sync, that it was destined to always be a chase. Hmmmm, sadly beautiful at the very same time.
Stunning!
With our thoughts we create...
an endless journey.
Warm regards,
James.
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reply by the author on 02-Sep-2023
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Hi Gypsy Queen,
I found it!
I'm not sure if it's because of your reference to 'wanderlust', but I feel this Tanka doesn't end... it's like it's on a continuous journey of never being able to connect... How clever of you!
The visual delight painted so deftly within your words held me firmly within its grip.
The way it could be adapted to two humans that were out of sync with each others timing, or that in sync, that it was destined to always be a chase. Hmmmm, sadly beautiful at the very same time.
Stunning!
With our thoughts we create...
an endless journey.
Warm regards,
James.
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Comment Written 02-Sep-2023
reply by the author on 02-Sep-2023
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Hey, there you are. I'm so happy to hear from you. Thank you for the stellar review. I'm glad you like it. I hope all is well. May you have a wonderful weekend full of wanderlust.
Besitos y abrazos
Marival
Comment from barbara.wilkey
This poem caused me to smile. I am a morning person. I like to be just a predawn and watch nature wake up. My husband is not a morning person and doesn't go to bed until the wee hours of the morning, so doesn't get up until a little past noon. But somehow, we make it work. LOL Your poem was beautiful.
reply by the author on 29-Aug-2023
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This poem caused me to smile. I am a morning person. I like to be just a predawn and watch nature wake up. My husband is not a morning person and doesn't go to bed until the wee hours of the morning, so doesn't get up until a little past noon. But somehow, we make it work. LOL Your poem was beautiful.
Comment Written 29-Aug-2023
reply by the author on 29-Aug-2023
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Hha... I'm a night person, like your husband.
Thank you very much for your excellent review and kind words.
Gypsy
Comment from shelley kaye
ooh cool! never thought of sunrises and sunsets that way before!
unique with good imagery and smooth flow...
nice. thank you for sharing!
shelley :)
reply by the author on 29-Aug-2023
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ooh cool! never thought of sunrises and sunsets that way before!
unique with good imagery and smooth flow...
nice. thank you for sharing!
shelley :)
Comment Written 29-Aug-2023
reply by the author on 29-Aug-2023
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Thank you very much for your excellent review and kind words.
Gypsy
Comment from GWHARGIS
That's why the moon and the sun can never be friends. They represent opposites. This was a fantasy style of poem. Personifying the sunrise and sunset. Great job. Gretchen
reply by the author on 29-Aug-2023
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That's why the moon and the sun can never be friends. They represent opposites. This was a fantasy style of poem. Personifying the sunrise and sunset. Great job. Gretchen
Comment Written 28-Aug-2023
reply by the author on 29-Aug-2023
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Thank you very much for your excellent review and kind words.
Gypsy
Comment from AP Apgar
I like your tanks poem- Excellent picture presentation- think if I was the sun god I'de be working a double shift!! Poem has a good syllable count - good flow - god and goddess- day and night - good story - clever - good job AP
reply by the author on 29-Aug-2023
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I like your tanks poem- Excellent picture presentation- think if I was the sun god I'de be working a double shift!! Poem has a good syllable count - good flow - god and goddess- day and night - good story - clever - good job AP
Comment Written 28-Aug-2023
reply by the author on 29-Aug-2023
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Thank you very much for your excellent review and kind words.
Gypsy
Comment from lyenochka
That's such a cool description to show the way some relationships just don't work out because the individuals are so different and wander a different path in life!
reply by the author on 29-Aug-2023
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That's such a cool description to show the way some relationships just don't work out because the individuals are so different and wander a different path in life!
Comment Written 28-Aug-2023
reply by the author on 29-Aug-2023
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Thank you very much big sister. You always get my meaning, and when you don't, I know I'm in trouble. LoL
Gypsy
Comment from Pearl Edwards
This is a lovely tanka poem Gypsy about the sunset godess never destined to meet her sunrise god. A beautiful presentation and a creatively personal one too of sunset and sunrise. Loved it, cheers
Valda
reply by the author on 29-Aug-2023
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This is a lovely tanka poem Gypsy about the sunset godess never destined to meet her sunrise god. A beautiful presentation and a creatively personal one too of sunset and sunrise. Loved it, cheers
Valda
Comment Written 28-Aug-2023
reply by the author on 29-Aug-2023
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Thank you very much for your exceptional six stars review and kind words.
Gypsy