Comment from
tempeste
Ciao!
I have never drank it but I loved preparing it for my father and every time it was a delight because I go made for the aroma.
Opening a new tin , that initially sudden puff of illy is pure bliss.
Pa found a new type in cachets that only needed hot water.
It was coffee with ginseng, the aroma was heavenly
I enjoyed your poem but I m afraid it won't qualify
EACH WORD needs to start with the same letter not just each line.
Checkout the other entries.
I believe prepositions can have a different letter but the less you use the better.
Comment Written 28-Aug-2023
reply by the author on 28-Aug-2023
reply by tempeste on 29-Aug-2023
Due to the blackout, my reply was deleted.
Your poem reads much better.
Love the flow thanks to the rhyme.
PS: I wondered if Mary (third last line ) was a typo.
did you mean :
Marry me
Merry me
Comment from
Sarah Tummey
Good effort. Your poem has every line starting with the same letter, but the contest rules say every word should start with the same letter, so if you wanted to include coffee, every word would have to start with a C.
Comment Written 28-Aug-2023
reply by the author on 28-Aug-2023