Comment from Mia Twysted

Excellent

There was a time in my life when things were very dark, and I thought the best way to end the pain was to end my life. You are still here, which means there is a plan for you.

 Comment Written 27-Aug-2023

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reply by the author on 15-Sep-2023

Yes Mia, I do realize my plan. I have since become a
Latter-day Saint Priest with the Church of Jesus Christ, a representative of the Gift of Life out of Philadelphia, and a major writing force in this world.
Doctor Ricky 1024
"Still Preaching to the Choir here at Fanstory"

Comment from Dolly'sPoems

Excellent

I am sorry for your loss and anniversaries are hard to deal with as all the memories come flooding back, your post is full of grief and sorrow, love Dolly x x x

 Comment Written 27-Aug-2023

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reply by the author on 04-Sep-2023

Thanks Dolly and always good to see you here.
Doctor Ricky

Comment from JSD

Excellent

You warned me that things would get dark. I hope you are out of this dark tunnel now. Thoughts and prayers go with you. This is a disturbing, but excellently written piece.

 Comment Written 27-Aug-2023

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reply by the author on 23-Sep-2023

Read my recent war coming up about the bull sharks and I told you it was going to get deep and now it's going to get disturbing!
Good day Jim!
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Comment from GWHARGIS

Excellent

I'm so sorry you went through that. I'm also thankful you failed at it. I've never been suicidal but I'm not going to say it might never happen to me. This was raw and emotional. Gretchen

 Comment Written 26-Aug-2023

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reply by the author on 26-Aug-2023

Thanks Gretchen.
Firstly, to go as deeply that day?
U
Need
2
Lose
Your
Mind.
Then when the call comes in.
To end the Sin.
9-11.
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Comment from Douglas Goff

Exceptional

One can definitely feel the stark grim reality of tragedy with this piece. The human spirit can go very dark in dark times.


I really think that your writing could be of great help to people suffering in th darkness my friend. Good work putting the 'call for help' clause at the end. Might get someone thinking.

Glad you survived. You are a blessing.
D

 Comment Written 26-Aug-2023

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reply by the author on 26-Aug-2023

This was one of the darkest days in my life.
Quite not as dark as when my son passed.
Thanks again and enjoy this evening.
Doctor Ricky

Comment from barbara.wilkey

Excellent

Thank you for sharing. I'm not sure what to say after reading this.

Surrounds me.to cloak and Poke. (not sure why the period is there, maybe a comma, and definitely needs a space.)

 Comment Written 26-Aug-2023

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reply by the author on 23-Sep-2023

Sorry to get back to you so late on this one.
Been extremely busy here in Myrtle Beach.
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