Scenes at a Third Party
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Comment from Sandra Stoner-Mitchell
I have to say you must be a genius to remember all this! You cast is amazing, so funny. Dear Ned, he's my star of the cast. Right, onto part 3. I might remember the 'who's who by the time I've got to part 5. Loved it as usual. :) Sandra xx
reply by the author on 06-Sep-2023
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I have to say you must be a genius to remember all this! You cast is amazing, so funny. Dear Ned, he's my star of the cast. Right, onto part 3. I might remember the 'who's who by the time I've got to part 5. Loved it as usual. :) Sandra xx
Comment Written 06-Sep-2023
reply by the author on 06-Sep-2023
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Thank you, Sandra. The list just gets longer, I'm afraid.
Comment from w.j.debi
This is an interesting group of supporters to help LorDee get elected. GED is a general--nice how a title can be stretched to fit the situation. Now what will the strategy be?
reply by the author on 03-Sep-2023
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This is an interesting group of supporters to help LorDee get elected. GED is a general--nice how a title can be stretched to fit the situation. Now what will the strategy be?
Comment Written 03-Sep-2023
reply by the author on 03-Sep-2023
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GED is willing to go along with a gag. Q
Comment from Faith Williams
Wow, Bill, that one had my head either spinning or shaking. That sign though...seriously. And the third-party poet laureate. Another chuckler. Thanks for sharing.
reply by the author on 03-Sep-2023
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Wow, Bill, that one had my head either spinning or shaking. That sign though...seriously. And the third-party poet laureate. Another chuckler. Thanks for sharing.
Comment Written 03-Sep-2023
reply by the author on 03-Sep-2023
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I know it gets deep, but soon it will be deeper.
Comment from LJbutterfly
My head is spinning. When I saw the cast of characters, I felt doomed. To my surprise, I was able to keep up and follow along, which allowed me to see the humor. What would Fox News, CNN, and MSNBC say if they met these characters? I want to see how they do in the polls.
reply by the author on 02-Sep-2023
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My head is spinning. When I saw the cast of characters, I felt doomed. To my surprise, I was able to keep up and follow along, which allowed me to see the humor. What would Fox News, CNN, and MSNBC say if they met these characters? I want to see how they do in the polls.
Comment Written 01-Sep-2023
reply by the author on 02-Sep-2023
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I hope the press is interested in covering either or both of the candidates.
Comment from nomi338
How in the world do you keep all that together, the names and such? Do you sometimes get a huge headache from the required effort? I don't think I could do it. Matter of fact, I know I could not.
reply by the author on 01-Sep-2023
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How in the world do you keep all that together, the names and such? Do you sometimes get a huge headache from the required effort? I don't think I could do it. Matter of fact, I know I could not.
Comment Written 01-Sep-2023
reply by the author on 01-Sep-2023
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If I can you can.
Comment from Ulla
Hahaha, Bill, our Ned is back, and now there is a Ged! What are you like? A1 is finding its way into Fanstory. Shock horror! I can't wait to reading on. Ulla:)))
reply by the author on 01-Sep-2023
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Hahaha, Bill, our Ned is back, and now there is a Ged! What are you like? A1 is finding its way into Fanstory. Shock horror! I can't wait to reading on. Ulla:)))
Comment Written 01-Sep-2023
reply by the author on 01-Sep-2023
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Thank you, Ulla. I will get the people going.
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I'll be looking forward to that!
Comment from Karen Cherry Threadgill
Funny, confusing, slamming.Makes me wonder what the inside of your head might look like. Where in blue blazes do you come up with your ideas? How much sugar do you eat? I await your next creation.
Karen
reply by the author on 01-Sep-2023
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Funny, confusing, slamming.Makes me wonder what the inside of your head might look like. Where in blue blazes do you come up with your ideas? How much sugar do you eat? I await your next creation.
Karen
Comment Written 01-Sep-2023
reply by the author on 01-Sep-2023
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Thank you, Karen. These characters have developed within their universe for a few years now.
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Well, after all, someone has to live there.!
Comment from JSD
Goodness. Utterly baffling but utterly hilarious. This should be on telly. I can just see it. Perhaps performed by puppets. Amazing writing. Well done.
reply by the author on 01-Sep-2023
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Goodness. Utterly baffling but utterly hilarious. This should be on telly. I can just see it. Perhaps performed by puppets. Amazing writing. Well done.
Comment Written 01-Sep-2023
reply by the author on 01-Sep-2023
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I will get my sock puppets out and stage it now. : )
Comment from lyenochka
Lots of fun in this script, Bill! Glad to see that there will be a Third Party candidate and Ned might just be the right VP for just about anyone. But it's good the GED is there to be front man and speak for him now and then when the identity is mistaken. I liked the banter with all the food references with Betty not-Crocker.
LorDee: Lets. (Let's)
reply by the author on 01-Sep-2023
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Lots of fun in this script, Bill! Glad to see that there will be a Third Party candidate and Ned might just be the right VP for just about anyone. But it's good the GED is there to be front man and speak for him now and then when the identity is mistaken. I liked the banter with all the food references with Betty not-Crocker.
LorDee: Lets. (Let's)
Comment Written 01-Sep-2023
reply by the author on 01-Sep-2023
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I left that lets in there for you, Helen. (not really)
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😊 Thanks?
Comment from Alexandra Trovato
This is an excellent script. I enjoyed reading it. Your entire presentation is good. Cool ending.You use descriptive words and interesting authentic dialogue that draws in a reader too. People can relate to this. Best wishes!
Alexandra
reply by the author on 01-Sep-2023
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This is an excellent script. I enjoyed reading it. Your entire presentation is good. Cool ending.You use descriptive words and interesting authentic dialogue that draws in a reader too. People can relate to this. Best wishes!
Alexandra
Comment Written 01-Sep-2023
reply by the author on 01-Sep-2023
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Thank you, Alexandra. Hope we all have fun.