Comment from Rachelle Allen

Excellent

I absolutely love this 5-7-5! It evokes memories of Dr. Seuss rhymes for me. Also, I can imagine this being taught to a little one in her high chair as peas are being spooned into her mouth. Before long, she'd be able to recite it, too, because it's flow and rhyme is so absolutely perfect! I haven't finished reading all the entries yet, but I'm thinking this one may get my vote! Good luck to you!! xo

 Comment Written 27-Aug-2023

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reply by the author on 28-Aug-2023

Thanks very much for a super review. Glad you enjoyed it.

reply by Rachelle Allen on 28-Aug-2023

So very much!!!

Comment from Dolly'sPoems

Excellent

A fine post about planting peas and the joy of watching them grow and the eating them fresh is so good for us, I wish you luck with the contest, this is uplifting, love Dolly x x x

 Comment Written 26-Aug-2023

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reply by the author on 26-Aug-2023

Thanks for a great review. Glad you enjoyed it.

Comment from Alexandra Trovato

Excellent

I love peas and my husband is starting to like them. I truly enjoyed reading your work. It's an excellent poem and presentation! You've used imagery and specific words that draw in a reader. Best wishes! Alexandra

 Comment Written 26-Aug-2023

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reply by the author on 26-Aug-2023

Thanks for a super review. Glad you enjoyed it.