I Choose Rainbows
Viewing comments for Chapter 109 "My Smile "Thoughts from the dark side
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Comment from ruminative scribbler
This made me smile - big and wide and weird too!
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If I had not already run out of sixes I would've give you a six!
Hope that makes you smile :-)
reply by the author on 25-Aug-2023
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This made me smile - big and wide and weird too!
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If I had not already run out of sixes I would've give you a six!
Hope that makes you smile :-)
Comment Written 25-Aug-2023
reply by the author on 25-Aug-2023
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It did. Thanks for the sunshine.
Comment from mermaids
Your words have a whimsical feel and flow to them. I can someone smiling as I read your words. Your free verse form creates a clear picture and I think this is the first poem I have read about smiling.
reply by the author on 25-Aug-2023
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Your words have a whimsical feel and flow to them. I can someone smiling as I read your words. Your free verse form creates a clear picture and I think this is the first poem I have read about smiling.
Comment Written 25-Aug-2023
reply by the author on 25-Aug-2023
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I Love free verse. Each line can be shaped with imagery and emotion.