Comment from LisaMay

Excellent

Good image choice to go with your risque and funny offering for the contest. I like your play on Wordsworth's famous poem, switching out the sight of lovely daffodils for the horrifying prospect of expensive and dirty diapers. I think it would be a real wake-up call if this vision happened to every young man when in the grip of passion!

 Comment Written 25-Aug-2023

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reply by the author on 26-Oct-2023

Thank you, Lisa

John

Comment from dragonpoet

Excellent

Hi John
This short rhyme shows the man in working hard to have a baby. But luckily this work is fun. I like the humor at the end showing he knows what his actions will lead to.
Good luck in the contest,
Keep writing and stay healthy
Have a great day.
Joan

 Comment Written 25-Aug-2023

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reply by the author on 26-Oct-2023

Thank you, Joan.
John

reply by dragonpoet on 27-Oct-2023

You're welcome, John.
Joan

Comment from Alexandra Trovato

Excellent

I truly enjoyed reading your work. It's an excellent poem and presentation! You've used imagery and specific words that draw in a reader. Your use of Best wishes! Alexandra

 Comment Written 25-Aug-2023

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reply by the author on 26-Oct-2023

Thank you, Alexandra.

John