2023 Gypsy's Haiku
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10 total reviews
Comment from Mark D. R.
Just wondering if Gypsy Blue ROSE aspires to be a model too?
Nice presentation for your personal Haiku portfolio!
Your chosen images are outstanding and elevate your verse. Color scheme is most appropriate too.
Mark
reply by the author on 27-Aug-2023
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Just wondering if Gypsy Blue ROSE aspires to be a model too?
Nice presentation for your personal Haiku portfolio!
Your chosen images are outstanding and elevate your verse. Color scheme is most appropriate too.
Mark
Comment Written 27-Aug-2023
reply by the author on 27-Aug-2023
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It's fiction but most women compare themselves and to unreasonable modle bodies and feel pressure to loose erweight and have plastic surgeries. Not me.
Thank you, Mark ., you are very kind. I appreciate your excellent review.
Gypsy
Comment from Mary Vigasin
A strong message to appreciate your own beauty. A lotus is beautiful in itself and does not desire to become a rose.
A girl should appreciate what and who she is.
Best wishes,
Mary
reply by the author on 26-Aug-2023
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A strong message to appreciate your own beauty. A lotus is beautiful in itself and does not desire to become a rose.
A girl should appreciate what and who she is.
Best wishes,
Mary
Comment Written 26-Aug-2023
reply by the author on 26-Aug-2023
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Thank you very much for taking the time to read and review my poem.
Gypsy
Comment from barbara.wilkey
Our society pushes people not to be realistic. Nature knows it's place and is content being happy with how they were created. I wish humans would follow suite. Thank you for sharing this gorgeous package with us.
reply by the author on 25-Aug-2023
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Our society pushes people not to be realistic. Nature knows it's place and is content being happy with how they were created. I wish humans would follow suite. Thank you for sharing this gorgeous package with us.
Comment Written 25-Aug-2023
reply by the author on 25-Aug-2023
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Thank you very much for your excellent review and kind words. May you have a wonderful weekend.
Gypsy hugs
Comment from aryr
This was a great haiku, Gypsy. The picture was wonderful. Your words were wonderful because they showed that beauty is in the eye of the beholder. Blessed Be n Hugs!!!
reply by the author on 25-Aug-2023
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This was a great haiku, Gypsy. The picture was wonderful. Your words were wonderful because they showed that beauty is in the eye of the beholder. Blessed Be n Hugs!!!
Comment Written 25-Aug-2023
reply by the author on 25-Aug-2023
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Thank you very much for your excellent review and kind words. May you have a wonderful weekend.
Blessed be.
Gypsy hugs
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Most welcome, Gypsy.
Comment from lyenochka
I like the comparison of the young girl desiring to be a model. But a lotus can be completely a beautiful "model" without becoming a rose. The girl needs to realize her own beauty.
reply by the author on 25-Aug-2023
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I like the comparison of the young girl desiring to be a model. But a lotus can be completely a beautiful "model" without becoming a rose. The girl needs to realize her own beauty.
Comment Written 25-Aug-2023
reply by the author on 25-Aug-2023
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Yes, you got it. Thank you very much for your excellent review and kind words, big sister. May you have a wonderful weekend.
Love
Marival
Comment from Jasmine Girl
Is a model better to be a rose? The line two and line three have two contradictory ideas. Why? The line two can be more positive that seems to make more sense. Just my question.
Well done.
reply by the author on 25-Aug-2023
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Is a model better to be a rose? The line two and line three have two contradictory ideas. Why? The line two can be more positive that seems to make more sense. Just my question.
Well done.
Comment Written 25-Aug-2023
reply by the author on 25-Aug-2023
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The lotus doesn't want to be a lotus because in nature all are equal. Humans think we are separate but we are not.
Thank you.
Comment from AP Apgar
I like your haiku poem - nice picture presentation- good syllable count and flow - excellent message- the lotus (normal people) always our own worst critics - wishing we were someone or something else- " then I'll be happy " not able to recognize their own intrinsic beauty- nicely done - AP
reply by the author on 25-Aug-2023
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I like your haiku poem - nice picture presentation- good syllable count and flow - excellent message- the lotus (normal people) always our own worst critics - wishing we were someone or something else- " then I'll be happy " not able to recognize their own intrinsic beauty- nicely done - AP
Comment Written 24-Aug-2023
reply by the author on 25-Aug-2023
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Thank you very much for your excellent review and kind words.
Gypsy
Comment from GWHARGIS
It's funny how nature doesn't try to change what it is. It will try to adapt to survive but not change out of jealousy, envy or want. Only man does that. Great poem. Gretchen
reply by the author on 25-Aug-2023
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It's funny how nature doesn't try to change what it is. It will try to adapt to survive but not change out of jealousy, envy or want. Only man does that. Great poem. Gretchen
Comment Written 24-Aug-2023
reply by the author on 25-Aug-2023
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Yes. You get it. Thank you very much for your excellent review and kind words.
Gypsy
Comment from Heather Knight
This is so short and yet so full of meaning. It's a pity we worry so much about our physical appearance and not only when we are teenagers. Our society has a lot to answer for.
P.S. I like lotus flowers better than roses, which might mean that beauty is subjective.
Me encanta tu texto. Muy bonito.x
reply by the author on 24-Aug-2023
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This is so short and yet so full of meaning. It's a pity we worry so much about our physical appearance and not only when we are teenagers. Our society has a lot to answer for.
P.S. I like lotus flowers better than roses, which might mean that beauty is subjective.
Me encanta tu texto. Muy bonito.x
Comment Written 24-Aug-2023
reply by the author on 24-Aug-2023
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Gracias! I appreciate your kind an insightful review.
Gypsy
Comment from shelley kaye
why do girls want to be models?
never understood the draw of that lol
cool flower haiku
good imagery
smooth flow
strong message
thank you for sharing
shelley :)
reply by the author on 24-Aug-2023
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why do girls want to be models?
never understood the draw of that lol
cool flower haiku
good imagery
smooth flow
strong message
thank you for sharing
shelley :)
Comment Written 24-Aug-2023
reply by the author on 24-Aug-2023
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I appreciate your kind an insightful review.
Gypsy