Comment from aryr

Excellent

This definitely was inspiring and a wonderful painting by Victoria Frances, Gypsy. Your words were what inspired me, they were beautiful. Blessed Be n Hugs!!!

 Comment Written 25-Aug-2023

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reply by the author on 25-Aug-2023

Thank you very much for your excellent review and kind words. May you have a wonderful weekend.
Blessed be.

Gypsy hugs

reply by aryr on 25-Aug-2023

Most welcome, Gypsy.

Comment from lyenochka

Excellent

What a beautiful free verse about a true and forever love that lasts beyond this world and stays faithful always. I especially liked the final stanza:
we'll dance
To the rhythm of our hearts
as long as we are alive
our tangled lives
will transcend
distance and circumstance

 Comment Written 25-Aug-2023

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reply by the author on 25-Aug-2023

Thank you, big sister.

Love

Marival

Comment from AP Apgar

Excellent

I like your free verse poem- Excellent picture presentation! - the poem flows nicely with its sophisticated rhyming quality - double spacing with old English cursive - you are right looks much better- - demise has a hard sound - maybe "from now till life's surrender'"smoother? Either way - just an idea - good job AP

 Comment Written 24-Aug-2023

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reply by the author on 25-Aug-2023

Good suggestion. It does sound better.

I like your new profile picture. :)

Thank you very much for your excellent review and kind words.

Gypsy

Comment from GWHARGIS

Excellent

I liked this poem. The thought that true love doesn't end with death is something I feel very strongly about. Even if the two involved are no longer, they're love is carried by those left behind. Love the Bram Stoker quite. Gretchen

 Comment Written 24-Aug-2023

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reply by the author on 25-Aug-2023

Thank you very much for your excellent review and kind words.

Gypsy

Comment from Mike Stevens

Excellent

Another fine poem, GYPSY....one of never-ending love that even death won't end....my forever lasted 9 and a half years. Still seems bizarre to me, one I thought was a love like the one in your poem. Wrong.

 Comment Written 24-Aug-2023

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reply by the author on 24-Aug-2023

I appreciate your kind an insightful review.

Gypsy

Comment from shelley kaye

Excellent

cool quote and the poem goes well with it
nice imagistic word choices and smooth flow

*in your notes you have the title at the bottom of the poem, but in the post, it's not there... oversight? or did you mean to do it that way?

still good either way!

thank you for sharing
shelley :)

 Comment Written 24-Aug-2023

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reply by the author on 24-Aug-2023

I was playing around with the title and decided to delete it. I guess I forgot to change the botyon poem. Thank you.

I appreciate your kind an insightful review.

Gypsy

Comment from Tom Horonzy

Excellent

While the poem was good the eye catching layout and picture was captivating and the selection of font style and color was spectacular
Good luck
Hbhbububuhwdu hi buwhdidh

 Comment Written 24-Aug-2023

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reply by the author on 24-Aug-2023

Thank you very much for your kind feedback and review.

Be well,

Gypsy

Comment from Debbie D'Arcy

Excellent

This is a lovely, romantic verse and I particularly enjoyed the last stanza in which you picked up the essence of the Bram Stoker quote which is truly beautiful. There is an eternal quality here about love and its powerful interaction with the sea and the sky. Thanks for sharing, Gypsy! Debbie

 Comment Written 24-Aug-2023

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reply by the author on 24-Aug-2023

Thank you very much for your kind feedback and review.

Be well,

Gypsy