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Flash the Dragon

He wasn't fast

6 total reviews 
Comment from royowen
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Hooray Roxy, I loved this story, as all stories should be, whether long or short, in rhyme and in prose, they should always have a happy ending, and this is a very good outcome for this little dragon, great post My friend, blessings Roy

 Comment Written 25-Aug-2023


reply by the author on 30-Aug-2023
    Thanks so much Roy
reply by royowen on 30-Aug-2023
    Most welcome
Comment from w.j.debi
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What an adorable story. It would make a great children's book, teaching them about various talents and bravery. Flash had a lot of courage and saved the day! Too bad you missed the contest. I think this would have done well.
One nit--I think you meant other(s):
"I must tell the other about what was said.

 Comment Written 25-Aug-2023


reply by the author on 30-Aug-2023
    I fixed my boo boo, Thanks so much
Comment from Debbie D'Arcy
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This is a really fun verse with its fine message of Flash being a hero after all and saving the day. It would be an absolute delight for children and very enjoyable here in Wales, UK where the dragon is a national symbol! One small edit - Flash kept very (quiet)... Love the names of the two foes, Big Al and Big Fred. Thanks for sharing. Debbie

 Comment Written 25-Aug-2023


reply by the author on 30-Aug-2023
    Thanks so much Debbie
Comment from Michele Harber
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I'm sorry you missed the contest, as this adorable story would have had a very good chance of winning. Of course, if it was the Kids' Motivational Poem contest that I won, I'm very relieved you didn't enter!

Your story made me smile. I love that you showed that not having one skill doesn't mean you don't have others. This is fun and uplifting, and your rhymes work nicely.

 Comment Written 25-Aug-2023


reply by the author on 30-Aug-2023
    Congrats on winning! =} Thanks so much
reply by Michele Harber on 30-Aug-2023
    Thank you, Roxanna. I appreciate that.
Comment from Teri7
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This is such a cute poem about Flash the Dragon. You used very good descriptive words and an adorable picture of Flash. I am so glad he turnout to be a hero. Thank you for sharing. Sorry you missed the contest. love and blessings, teri

 Comment Written 25-Aug-2023


reply by the author on 30-Aug-2023
    Thank you Teri
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
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This is a fun post Roxanna and I enjoyed your fine words that children would love, it is a pity you missed the contest, but at least the readers have a chance to enjoy it now, love Dolly x x x

 Comment Written 25-Aug-2023


reply by the author on 30-Aug-2023
    Thank you Dolly