Among the Leaves
Entry for the rhyming poem contest10 total reviews
Comment from zanya
This is simply a beautiful poem illustrating what poetry does best i.e awakens our emotions to moments in time and experiences - its actually a joy to read
reply by the author on 25-Aug-2023
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This is simply a beautiful poem illustrating what poetry does best i.e awakens our emotions to moments in time and experiences - its actually a joy to read
Comment Written 25-Aug-2023
reply by the author on 25-Aug-2023
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Thank you for dropping by today to read and share your thoughts. Your feedback is much appreciated!
Comment from Ginda Simpson
Perfect rhyming for this contest. And with your words you have shared a display that nature so generously gifts us with the changing seasons. The beauty is in the details and you have captured them.
reply by the author on 25-Aug-2023
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Perfect rhyming for this contest. And with your words you have shared a display that nature so generously gifts us with the changing seasons. The beauty is in the details and you have captured them.
Comment Written 25-Aug-2023
reply by the author on 25-Aug-2023
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Thank you for dropping by today to read and share your thoughts. Your feedback is much appreciated!
Comment from Jasmine Girl
I really enjoy reading your rhyming poem that painted colorful and lively pictures of all seasons. The transition from season to season is very smooth. I see many Monarch butterflies pictures on social networks nowadays.
Excellent.
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I really enjoy reading your rhyming poem that painted colorful and lively pictures of all seasons. The transition from season to season is very smooth. I see many Monarch butterflies pictures on social networks nowadays.
Excellent.
Comment Written 25-Aug-2023
Comment from BethShelby
This is a lovely rhyming poem that takes in all the seasons. The seasons fly by faster than they did when I was young or so it seems. I might as well try to enjoy them all.
reply by the author on 25-Aug-2023
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This is a lovely rhyming poem that takes in all the seasons. The seasons fly by faster than they did when I was young or so it seems. I might as well try to enjoy them all.
Comment Written 24-Aug-2023
reply by the author on 25-Aug-2023
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Yes, there is beauty in every season and stages of life. We just need to look for and appreciate them. I?m glad you enjoyed this read and thank you fir sharing your thoughts.
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
A wonderful seasonal write June and I enjoyed the bouquets, dragonflies and monarchs and even the snowflakes sounded joyous, a fine entry for the contest, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 25-Aug-2023
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A wonderful seasonal write June and I enjoyed the bouquets, dragonflies and monarchs and even the snowflakes sounded joyous, a fine entry for the contest, love Dolly x
Comment Written 24-Aug-2023
reply by the author on 25-Aug-2023
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Yes, there is beauty in every season and stages of life. We just need to look for and appreciate them. I?m glad you enjoyed this read and thank you fir sharing your thoughts.
Comment from JSD
Lovely, assured, unforced rhymes and a successful survey of the seasons with a theme of love. This is most effective writing and I wish you all the very best of luck in the competition.
reply by the author on 24-Aug-2023
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Lovely, assured, unforced rhymes and a successful survey of the seasons with a theme of love. This is most effective writing and I wish you all the very best of luck in the competition.
Comment Written 24-Aug-2023
reply by the author on 24-Aug-2023
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I appreciate your dropping by to read and share your thoughts. Glad you enjoyed this piece on seasons and transitions in life. Thanks for the feedback.
Comment from Iza Deleanu
What a beautiful image is emerging from your words:"
Soon pink skies crown the earth at dawn,
Sweet scent of lilacs fill the air.
Gold monarchs flit across the lawn,
while dragonflies perform with flair". Thank you for sharing and good luck with the contest.
reply by the author on 24-Aug-2023
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What a beautiful image is emerging from your words:"
Soon pink skies crown the earth at dawn,
Sweet scent of lilacs fill the air.
Gold monarchs flit across the lawn,
while dragonflies perform with flair". Thank you for sharing and good luck with the contest.
Comment Written 24-Aug-2023
reply by the author on 24-Aug-2023
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I appreciate your dropping by to read and share your thoughts. Glad you enjoyed this piece on seasons and transitions in life. Thanks for the feedback.
Comment from lyenochka
You took us through the seasons of the year from Autumn to summer and ending in June (of course because that's your name!). I love how you captured the feelings, sights, and scents of each time. Best wishes in the contest!
reply by the author on 24-Aug-2023
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You took us through the seasons of the year from Autumn to summer and ending in June (of course because that's your name!). I love how you captured the feelings, sights, and scents of each time. Best wishes in the contest!
Comment Written 24-Aug-2023
reply by the author on 24-Aug-2023
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I appreciate your dropping by to read and share your thoughts. Glad you enjoyed this piece on seasons and transitions in life. Thanks for the feedback.
Comment from RodG
I enjoyed this tribute to the seasons. We get a vivid glimpse of each in respective stanzas. It's interesting that only Autumn affects the Speaker deeply because he's grieving.
Rod
reply by the author on 24-Aug-2023
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I enjoyed this tribute to the seasons. We get a vivid glimpse of each in respective stanzas. It's interesting that only Autumn affects the Speaker deeply because he's grieving.
Rod
Comment Written 24-Aug-2023
reply by the author on 24-Aug-2023
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I appreciate your dropping by to read and share your thoughts. Glad you enjoyed this piece on seasons and transitions in life. Thanks for the feedback.
Comment from Debbie D'Arcy
This is a charming and skilfully expressed 4 stanza verse conveying in evocative detail some of the delights of the seasons. There is excellent flow and the abab rhyme is natural and unforced. This is a strong entry for the contest and I wish you luck! Debbie
reply by the author on 24-Aug-2023
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This is a charming and skilfully expressed 4 stanza verse conveying in evocative detail some of the delights of the seasons. There is excellent flow and the abab rhyme is natural and unforced. This is a strong entry for the contest and I wish you luck! Debbie
Comment Written 24-Aug-2023
reply by the author on 24-Aug-2023
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I appreciate your dropping by to read and share your thoughts. Glad you enjoyed this piece on seasons and transitions in life. Thanks for the feedback.