2023 Gypsy's Free Verse
Viewing comments for Chapter 13 "How Can you Stand there".
14 total reviews
Comment from patcelaw
It is a shame when we think we have a good relationship with someone and find that the relationship turns cold and distant. I enjoyed your poem very much and I wish you the very best with all of your writing. Patricia
reply by the author on 24-Aug-2023
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It is a shame when we think we have a good relationship with someone and find that the relationship turns cold and distant. I enjoyed your poem very much and I wish you the very best with all of your writing. Patricia
Comment Written 24-Aug-2023
reply by the author on 24-Aug-2023
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Thank you very much for taking the time to review my poem. May you have a wonderful day.
Gypsy
Comment from Karen Cherry Threadgill
Both the poem and the picture are beautiful and haunting.Did you already have the picture or did you search for it? Both are bonded to each other. Remarkable. You do great work. Keep doing it please.
Karen
reply by the author on 23-Aug-2023
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Both the poem and the picture are beautiful and haunting.Did you already have the picture or did you search for it? Both are bonded to each other. Remarkable. You do great work. Keep doing it please.
Karen
Comment Written 23-Aug-2023
reply by the author on 23-Aug-2023
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It's an ekphrastic free verse, the picture comes first and the poem is inspired by the picture.
Thank you very much for your excellent review and kind words.
Gypsy
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you are welcome. I love reviewing. You are a breeze, I only need remind you how talented you are. Karen
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Thank you, Karen. You are so sweet :)
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u r welcome
Comment from Mike Stevens
Another fine poem, Gypsy-----and one that asked blue same question I've asked myself over and over, still no closer to understanding what she was thinking
reply by the author on 23-Aug-2023
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Another fine poem, Gypsy-----and one that asked blue same question I've asked myself over and over, still no closer to understanding what she was thinking
Comment Written 23-Aug-2023
reply by the author on 23-Aug-2023
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LoL Thank you for taking the time to read and review my poem. :) Be well.
Gypsy
Comment from barbara.wilkey
The artwork goes perfectly with this poem. The wilting flowers at the bottom adds an exclamation point to the presentation. You are so talented at not only writing the poem but knowing how to present it.
reply by the author on 23-Aug-2023
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The artwork goes perfectly with this poem. The wilting flowers at the bottom adds an exclamation point to the presentation. You are so talented at not only writing the poem but knowing how to present it.
Comment Written 23-Aug-2023
reply by the author on 23-Aug-2023
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Thank you for taking the time to read and review my poem. :) Be well.
Gypsy
Comment from shelley kaye
love the wilted flower picture at the bottom - great ending to a bittersweet poem with nice imagery and a smooth flow of words
thank you for sharing
shelley :)
reply by the author on 23-Aug-2023
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love the wilted flower picture at the bottom - great ending to a bittersweet poem with nice imagery and a smooth flow of words
thank you for sharing
shelley :)
Comment Written 23-Aug-2023
reply by the author on 23-Aug-2023
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Thank you very much for the detailed and kind review. Be well.
Gypsy
Comment from Ricky1024
Distance can horridify any relationship as well as not understanding.
This was well written rich in Theme and Imagery.
It also, read well and flowed well with No Grammar Issues.
Thanks for sharing this and have a great day!
Doctor Ricky
reply by the author on 23-Aug-2023
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Distance can horridify any relationship as well as not understanding.
This was well written rich in Theme and Imagery.
It also, read well and flowed well with No Grammar Issues.
Thanks for sharing this and have a great day!
Doctor Ricky
Comment Written 23-Aug-2023
reply by the author on 23-Aug-2023
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Thank you very much for the detailed and kind review. Be well.
Gypsy
Comment from Douglas Goff
Great color scheme and photo. I find writing about a photo to be an interesting challenge. There are some other site challenges where they provide the picture and every entrant writes about it. Challenging.
I created a contest; one word with a picture on this site. It is the highest paid form of poetry on the planet, used in advertising. For example, if I put a picture of a Diamond with the word Forever with it, every woman in the Western Hemisphere knows exactly what that means. It was a billion dollar advertising campaign.
But alas, people were upset with my attempt at something new. Starving artists and all that.
Anyways, I'm rambling. Nice work here. I enjoy your talented brain.
D
reply by the author on 23-Aug-2023
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Great color scheme and photo. I find writing about a photo to be an interesting challenge. There are some other site challenges where they provide the picture and every entrant writes about it. Challenging.
I created a contest; one word with a picture on this site. It is the highest paid form of poetry on the planet, used in advertising. For example, if I put a picture of a Diamond with the word Forever with it, every woman in the Western Hemisphere knows exactly what that means. It was a billion dollar advertising campaign.
But alas, people were upset with my attempt at something new. Starving artists and all that.
Anyways, I'm rambling. Nice work here. I enjoy your talented brain.
D
Comment Written 23-Aug-2023
reply by the author on 23-Aug-2023
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Hello, Douglas, you can ramble with me any time. LoL I used to participate in prompt contests but most of them were not fair. Many times, the worst entry won because they had a lot of friends. Now I only enter site cash contests.
Thank you very much for the detailed and kind review. Be well.
Gypsy
Comment from royowen
What a great piece of artwork to go with the narrative Gypsy, and as always you're doing what you do very well indeed, the poem is a wonderful match for the art, beautifully written, blessings Roy
reply by the author on 23-Aug-2023
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What a great piece of artwork to go with the narrative Gypsy, and as always you're doing what you do very well indeed, the poem is a wonderful match for the art, beautifully written, blessings Roy
Comment Written 23-Aug-2023
reply by the author on 23-Aug-2023
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Thank you very much, Roy. I appreciate your kind reviews. Be well.
Gypsy
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Most welcome
Comment from JSD
A portrait of superiority and rejection and a parallel poem of superiority and rejection. Love the way you have caught the tone of the picture so successfully in your simple and sparse words.
reply by the author on 23-Aug-2023
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A portrait of superiority and rejection and a parallel poem of superiority and rejection. Love the way you have caught the tone of the picture so successfully in your simple and sparse words.
Comment Written 23-Aug-2023
reply by the author on 23-Aug-2023
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Thank you very much for the detailed and kind review. Be well.
Gypsy
Comment from Jasmine Girl
This poem could be included in your romantic poetry book , too. I like your using different colors for different lines. The color means something. I can tell.
Well done.
reply by the author on 23-Aug-2023
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This poem could be included in your romantic poetry book , too. I like your using different colors for different lines. The color means something. I can tell.
Well done.
Comment Written 22-Aug-2023
reply by the author on 23-Aug-2023
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Thank you very much for your excellent review and kind words.
Gypsy