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Ancient Art of Poetry

Viewing comments for Chapter 28 "The Race"
A compilation of poems

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Comment from Dolly'sPoems
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Well this is a very short Haiku and yet there is a lot of action in this one and it is fast as well as short, much enjoyed, good luck with the contest, love Dolly x x x

 Comment Written 26-Aug-2023

reply by the author on 28-Aug-2023
    Thank you Dolly so much for your review! I am getting emails to read your poetry but I'm unable to access, I'm not sure why. Thank you again have a great day!
Comment from Ricky1024
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This contest entry was well written rich in Theme and Imagery.
It also, read well and flowed well with No Grammar Issues.
Thanks for sharing this and good luck with your contest entry.
Doctor Ricky

 Comment Written 23-Aug-2023

reply by the author on 28-Aug-2023
    Thank you Ricky, I've always I appreciate your reviews. I hope your day is amazing. Thank you for your time and your comments!
Comment from Lee, Undone
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I don't really understand. I assume it's for a laugh I like the photo, perhaps about the race to become cat food or to try not to become that? Was funny.

 Comment Written 23-Aug-2023

reply by the author on 28-Aug-2023
    Thank you Lee for your review. I appreciate your comments glad you found it amusing I'm referring to the race the salmon run goes through every year, and Coho is a type of salmon. Thank you again!
Comment from Iza Deleanu
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I like how you describe this phenomen in short and engaging words -

Mighty
Chum salmon
race! - Thank you for sharing and good luck with your writings and the contest.

 Comment Written 22-Aug-2023

reply by the author on 28-Aug-2023
    Thank you! So glad you liked it! I appreciate you stopping in for a read and hope you enjoy your day!
Comment from Val Crisson
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Good one, and no word spared. Lived in the Northwest forever, not sure the chum raced but who knows. I would like to see your title - haiku (mighty). It's the proper way to title a haiku, but it's your work after all. Nice job.

 Comment Written 22-Aug-2023

reply by the author on 28-Aug-2023
    Thank you so much for your kind review. And your suggestions always appreciated by me. Also, your insight is great so thank you so much and enjoy your day!
Comment from Alexandra Trovato
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I enjoyed reading your excellent work! I particularly like the expressed urgency in such few syllables. That causes it to seem even shorter.
I could relate to trying to find words for haikus so I know you did well here. Best wishes! Alexandra

 Comment Written 22-Aug-2023

reply by the author on 28-Aug-2023
    Thank you, Alexandra. I appreciate your review and glad that you like it have a great day.